sounds great!^^ alright, I will find a beta, and then most likely redo the post instead of posting it all over again. and once again, thank you so much!
Mmmmmmmmm . . . . . nope, not really anything else. Once you get your work looked over and cleaned up, just either edit this post with the new changes or make a new post altogether. That should more or less be that.
Anyway, you're looking for betas, so I shall supply them:
Only things I'll mention regarding the current beta-readers is that Ichigo (the podcaster) is currently travelling the country and probably won't have much time to help and Red Tigress is off being a camp counsellor for the rest of the summer. Most of the others (unless they already made a note of not doing fanfics) should be fair game. Either way, give 'em a message and see if they can help you out.
oh wow, certainly! I would love to have it published! and yes, a beta would be nice (since in all reality, my grammar is terrible...) So I'm not really surprised about the mistakes.^^;
is there anything else I need to do before getting it published besides getting it Beta'd?
I think this story is pretty good and would be happy to publish it if you still want to - there's still some things you need to clean up, though.
Near the beginning for a paragraph you switched from 3rd person narrative to 1st; a little after that you made a tense mistake, starting a sentence in present and ending in past. In general you're good, but you have a few little things sticking out here and there through the course of reading.
If you would like, I do know a good place on-site filled with beta-readers if you'd like someone to take care of this stuff for ya. Again, only if you still want to.
animegal84119
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/29/08 | Reply
@SomeGuy:
sounds great!^^ alright, I will find a beta, and then most likely redo the post instead of posting it all over again. and once again, thank you so much!
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 06/29/08 | Reply
@animegal84119:
Mmmmmmmmm . . . . . nope, not really anything else. Once you get your work looked over and cleaned up, just either edit this post with the new changes or make a new post altogether. That should more or less be that.
Anyway, you're looking for betas, so I shall supply them:
http://www.theotaku.com/worlds/writersbloc
Only things I'll mention regarding the current beta-readers is that Ichigo (the podcaster) is currently travelling the country and probably won't have much time to help and Red Tigress is off being a camp counsellor for the rest of the summer. Most of the others (unless they already made a note of not doing fanfics) should be fair game. Either way, give 'em a message and see if they can help you out.
Sound good?
animegal84119
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/29/08 | Reply
@SomeGuy:
oh wow, certainly! I would love to have it published! and yes, a beta would be nice (since in all reality, my grammar is terrible...) So I'm not really surprised about the mistakes.^^;
is there anything else I need to do before getting it published besides getting it Beta'd?
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 06/28/08 | Reply
Hiya.
I think this story is pretty good and would be happy to publish it if you still want to - there's still some things you need to clean up, though.
Near the beginning for a paragraph you switched from 3rd person narrative to 1st; a little after that you made a tense mistake, starting a sentence in present and ending in past. In general you're good, but you have a few little things sticking out here and there through the course of reading.
If you would like, I do know a good place on-site filled with beta-readers if you'd like someone to take care of this stuff for ya. Again, only if you still want to.