Oooh, at home with Sasuke! XD lol. I like the beginning a lot...my heart, my soul, and my mind...very creative^^ I love Naruto's innocent nature, you did a great job at developing his character personality.
Great job my friend^^ Second chapter was very exciting...and Sasuke's mysterious attitude is alluring. ^_^ Keep it up!
innocent heart
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/06/08 | Reply
Oooh, at home with Sasuke! XD lol. I like the beginning a lot...my heart, my soul, and my mind...very creative^^ I love Naruto's innocent nature, you did a great job at developing his character personality.
Great job my friend^^ Second chapter was very exciting...and Sasuke's mysterious attitude is alluring. ^_^ Keep it up!