I never thought a story I wrote for my creative writing class would be so popular! I thought that class was a waste of time, but if all I accomplished was to take this story that had been in my head for years and finally write it out, then I feel the class was worthwhile afterall!
this was an amazing story. (one of the best i've read in years!) i fell in love w/it immediately! ur characters were very defined and i loved the character development with matt!! this would be an awesome short story manga, and it is very apparent that u have a wonderful talent of writing. i really hope u post more stories soon!!
I read alot and i have to hand it to you. You really sucked me in with this story and you have a great tallent for writing. The dialouge and the descriptiveness of the story, litteraly had me ignore work for about 15 to 20 min thinking about how things would end up between matt and Julia. once again though great job.
Awwww It was so cute! Lol, I love romance stories so much, and this is probably one of my favorites as far as short stories go. You should write more stuff like this. I'd happily read them if you did.
I wasn't quite sure about this to begin with, but I was so easily sucked into this. Your description and the interaction between the characters seemed so real, it was almost like I was there.
You've really got a talent with writing. Not only was this a good read, but it also teaches the lesson of living your life to the fullest. It was a fabulous read, and I thank you for writing it.
Y'know, I had this story sitting on my pile of Fan Words for the past 12 hours or so and I just didn't want to start it right away because it was long and I was tired. Skimming through I could tell right away that you had some proper language usage and spelling so I had a good feeling that this would get published.
Now that I've finally read it, I'm happy to know that I wasn't wrong. Brilliant story. Clever and funny language when you needed it, well-defined characters as well fleshed out (fleshed . . . irony) as one can hope in a short story, and still leaving just enough unanswered questions to give a reader something to think about. For me thinking back now, it feels like the Julia interactions were just so easy for him, and there was rarely a hitch - but then again, the whole thing was a setup by his guardian angel, so maybe it was just that way to speed up the point of the vision..
Aside from that bit, the only thing I'm a little sad about is that you didn't have more dialogue between Matt and Julia, like when they're having dinner and learning about each other. I guess it was mostly for time (same with the fast-forward through meeting the parents and all), but you write dialogue so well so I bet it would have been fun to listen in on their date. That's about the worst of it for me, though.
Very nicely done. Very, very nicely done. And yes, brunettes rule.
twilight tiger
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/22/09 | Reply
i love this! its beautifully written!
Madison2294
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/07/09 | Reply
*thundering applause*
thats an amazing story!! you are a very gited writer!!!
cutiesl
Otakuite | Posted 12/05/08 | Reply
OMGOSH!!!!
This was AWESOME!!
I loved it lots! <33
sassygirl0001
Senior Otaku | Posted 11/01/08 | Reply
I never thought a story I wrote for my creative writing class would be so popular! I thought that class was a waste of time, but if all I accomplished was to take this story that had been in my head for years and finally write it out, then I feel the class was worthwhile afterall!
Kazumi Saya
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/25/08 | Reply
omg loved this! u hav great ideas. this story was so cute.
XXXchad
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/13/08 | Reply
wow thts very good and long bet ur fingers were sore after tht lol
The Twilight Zone
Otakuite++ | Posted 06/01/08 | Reply
Awesome!!1 oh my lordy!!! that was amazing!!! i wish there was ,more!!!
wolf angel1
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/29/08 | Reply
that is such a beatiful story i love it awesome!!
haseo luver92
Otaku Legend | Posted 05/27/08 | Reply
this was an amazing story. (one of the best i've read in years!) i fell in love w/it immediately! ur characters were very defined and i loved the character development with matt!! this would be an awesome short story manga, and it is very apparent that u have a wonderful talent of writing. i really hope u post more stories soon!!
haseo
shinigami shadow
Otakuite | Posted 05/24/08 | Reply
I read alot and i have to hand it to you. You really sucked me in with this story and you have a great tallent for writing. The dialouge and the descriptiveness of the story, litteraly had me ignore work for about 15 to 20 min thinking about how things would end up between matt and Julia. once again though great job.
a wit 2
Otakuite+ | Posted 05/18/08 | Reply
Awwww
It was so cute! Lol, I love romance stories so much, and this is probably one of my favorites as far as short stories go. You should write more stuff like this. I'd happily read them if you did. 
mewmewpudding
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/17/08 | Reply
I wasn't quite sure about this to begin with, but I was so easily sucked into this. Your description and the interaction between the characters seemed so real, it was almost like I was there.
You've really got a talent with writing. Not only was this a good read, but it also teaches the lesson of living your life to the fullest. It was a fabulous read, and I thank you for writing it.
And yes, brunettes are the best. ;]
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 05/16/08 | Reply
Y'know, I had this story sitting on my pile of Fan Words for the past 12 hours or so and I just didn't want to start it right away because it was long and I was tired. Skimming through I could tell right away that you had some proper language usage and spelling so I had a good feeling that this would get published.
Now that I've finally read it, I'm happy to know that I wasn't wrong. Brilliant story. Clever and funny language when you needed it, well-defined characters as well fleshed out (fleshed . . . irony) as one can hope in a short story, and still leaving just enough unanswered questions to give a reader something to think about. For me thinking back now, it feels like the Julia interactions were just so easy for him, and there was rarely a hitch - but then again, the whole thing was a setup by his guardian angel, so maybe it was just that way to speed up the point of the vision..
Aside from that bit, the only thing I'm a little sad about is that you didn't have more dialogue between Matt and Julia, like when they're having dinner and learning about each other. I guess it was mostly for time (same with the fast-forward through meeting the parents and all), but you write dialogue so well so I bet it would have been fun to listen in on their date. That's about the worst of it for me, though.
Very nicely done. Very, very nicely done. And yes, brunettes rule.