Ugh... I hate doing critiques, but I guess I'll say something. ^_^ (Ah! And sorry for the late reply. I forgot to bring my internet flashdrive back home yesterday. >,<)
What I like? I like how it's really hilarious. I probably need to reread your comic again, since my internet was really slow and I tended to forget a bit of what happened. *shot* Your comic is really attention-grabbing also. It's unlikely to predict well what will happen later in the story. >o<
What I dislike? It's probably just me, but I thought the intro didn't really transition well into the story. It was really just direct. I also was confused by the characters that came afterwards too. I was like, "Who are they?" for a second.
Other than that, I can't wait to see what happens, Axel.
NINNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA but seriously. I always find the random picture taking funny though afterwards he seems nowhere to be found.
The funny part is... That will all be explained later on in an amusing plt twist.
I also like how Yuna is such a troll.
Trollololol.
What do I dislike? I dunno, its hard to find something I dislike about your comic. What do I want to see more of? Axel getting ****ed and nick's "witty" comments.
Oh my, dert. xD
I did like the boss battle scene perspective you did after they "saved" axel. MOAR EXPERIMENTS! Less of? Not sure I kinda want more of everything. Im not the best critic. lol Funny ideas? I do like that mirror thing I did with the entrail vision. Could be a funny joke at some point or a plot twist where Yuna uses it on himself to make himself a god and such. I dunno. Thats all I can really think of at the moment.
Interesting idea that I'm seriously considering. B)
~end to this giant waste of your time~
*PUNCH* SHATTAP! Not a waste. Ta! :D Much appreciated.
Axel (Secretly Rachel. An amusing little twist I intend to add in later.) has a different personality for each thing I shove her in. In this one, her main flaw is being somewhat selfish. Hehe.
Also, I intend to make sure Yuna is subjected to more pain. ;D
I want to see less of Nick's body hair - hur hur hur B)
To be at least a little productive:
I like the fact that pretty much all the characters have a pretty straightforward personality, though Axel switches from HELL NO *PUNCH* to Alrighty~ rather quick.
Hmm more of..... I want to see Yuna fall on his face. :D
No funny ideas, atm.
superstarpanou
Question Cafér (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/19/11 | Reply
Ugh... I hate doing critiques, but I guess I'll say something. ^_^ (Ah! And sorry for the late reply. I forgot to bring my internet flashdrive back home yesterday. >,<)
What I like? I like how it's really hilarious. I probably need to reread your comic again, since my internet was really slow and I tended to forget a bit of what happened. *shot* Your comic is really attention-grabbing also. It's unlikely to predict well what will happen later in the story. >o<
What I dislike? It's probably just me, but I thought the intro didn't really transition well into the story. It was really just direct. I also was confused by the characters that came afterwards too. I was like, "Who are they?" for a second.
Other than that, I can't wait to see what happens, Axel.
Starscream
Fembot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/19/11 | Reply
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NINNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA but seriously. I always find the random picture taking funny though afterwards he seems nowhere to be found.
The funny part is... That will all be explained later on in an amusing plt twist.
I also like how Yuna is such a troll.
Trollololol.
What do I dislike? I dunno, its hard to find something I dislike about your comic. What do I want to see more of? Axel getting ****ed and nick's "witty" comments.
Oh my, dert. xD
I did like the boss battle scene perspective you did after they "saved" axel. MOAR EXPERIMENTS! Less of? Not sure I kinda want more of everything. Im not the best critic. lol Funny ideas? I do like that mirror thing I did with the entrail vision. Could be a funny joke at some point or a plot twist where Yuna uses it on himself to make himself a god and such. I dunno. Thats all I can really think of at the moment.
Interesting idea that I'm seriously considering. B)
~end to this giant waste of your time~
*PUNCH* SHATTAP! Not a waste. Ta! :D Much appreciated.
Starscream
Fembot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/19/11 | Reply
@Felix the Cat:
Axel (Secretly Rachel. An amusing little twist I intend to add in later.) has a different personality for each thing I shove her in. In this one, her main flaw is being somewhat selfish. Hehe.
Also, I intend to make sure Yuna is subjected to more pain. ;D
Felix the Cat
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 05/18/11 | Reply
I want to see less of Nick's body hair - hur hur hur B)
To be at least a little productive:
I like the fact that pretty much all the characters have a pretty straightforward personality, though Axel switches from HELL NO *PUNCH* to Alrighty~ rather quick.
Hmm more of..... I want to see Yuna fall on his face. :D
No funny ideas, atm.