You did a good job on this. I am grateful for the summery as well, it helped things make sense a little more. I am very interested to know what the key was for as well. Really nice work, the summery made me wish I had watched Prison Break!
Wow, you packed a lot into those few paragraphs! Even before I read the summary you linked to, the tension in Teddy's life came across wonderfully. I can't wait to read more of this.
Magnus Lensherr
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/30/08 | Reply
You did a good job on this. I am grateful for the summery as well, it helped things make sense a little more. I am very interested to know what the key was for as well. Really nice work, the summery made me wish I had watched Prison Break!
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DDG
Senior Otaku | Posted 07/29/08 | Reply
@NightBeck:
I'm glad to hear I'm getting across the tension, without any further background knowledge of the premise known. :) Thanks for reading!
NightBeck
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/28/08 | Reply
Wow, you packed a lot into those few paragraphs! Even before I read the summary you linked to, the tension in Teddy's life came across wonderfully. I can't wait to read more of this.
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/28/08 | Reply
@DDG:
I can wait, no problem. Take your time. =D
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DDG
Senior Otaku | Posted 07/28/08 | Reply
@ShadowLight:
I'm glad you're interested. :D Eventually I'll have it finished and posted, but who knows when that will happen, lol.
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/28/08 | Reply
Wow...sounds quite interesting. Although Teddy has a really awkward, creepy dad, hehe...
Look forward to read more about it!
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