thanks, again. i am sooo glad u liked my poem. i am really entertained by vampire stories and i thought i would write a poem about them. this poem wrote itself in my head (common for me) and i typed it out.
my english teacher told me that it could be shortened, so i shortened it, but i left the long version on here.
the rhyming thing is sometimes hard, sometimes easy. but the writing thing is natural for me. everyone tells me its cuz i read so much.
Last edited by twilight tiger at 7:08:14 PM EST on February 25, 2009.
wow your a very good writer. Your do rhyming poems beautifully. Thats a skill that is not to common. I love this poem. i have always been fascinated by the legends of vampires and this captures it very nicely. I love the picture to. good job
YEAH!! thank you. u dont know how much it means that u like my work. i know that i added a bit of extra stuff that could have been taken out and i use some words others dont use, but cool. glad u liked it!
maybe, if u write any more poems, and they dont all have to be about sad stuff, and if so, u can prob spruce them up a bit w/ humor? i dont know. ignore that. i like ur work tho. it speaks. u know?
and i like vampire stuff too. like, one day me and my frend were emailing each other about vampires and that night, the idea just came to me, it started forming in my head, and i wrote it down really quickly, and that is how it was born.
well this poem was pretty good alot of words i wouldn have used but never the less affective....this was really good and i love vampires so good job!!!
twilight tiger
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/25/09 | Reply
@frfry:
thanks, again. i am sooo glad u liked my poem. i am really entertained by vampire stories and i thought i would write a poem about them. this poem wrote itself in my head (common for me) and i typed it out.
my english teacher told me that it could be shortened, so i shortened it, but i left the long version on here.
the rhyming thing is sometimes hard, sometimes easy. but the writing thing is natural for me. everyone tells me its cuz i read so much.
Last edited by twilight tiger at 7:08:14 PM EST on February 25, 2009.
frfry
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/23/09 | Reply
wow your a very good writer. Your do rhyming poems beautifully. Thats a skill that is not to common. I love this poem. i have always been fascinated by the legends of vampires and this captures it very nicely. I love the picture to. good job
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/04/09 | Reply
@Karmira:
I meant how you describe one, but I like the pic a lot, too.
twilight tiger
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/30/08 | Reply
@vampedtwinkie:
omg! u used my word. i made that word up after getting tired of the boring word 'cool'.
but..........coolio
vampedtwinkie
Otakuite++ | Posted 12/30/08 | Reply
@twilight tiger:
coolio!!
:)
twilight tiger
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/30/08 | Reply
@vampedtwinkie:
YEAH!! thank you. u dont know how much it means that u like my work. i know that i added a bit of extra stuff that could have been taken out and i use some words others dont use, but cool. glad u liked it!
maybe, if u write any more poems, and they dont all have to be about sad stuff, and if so, u can prob spruce them up a bit w/ humor? i dont know. ignore that. i like ur work tho. it speaks. u know?
and i like vampire stuff too. like, one day me and my frend were emailing each other about vampires and that night, the idea just came to me, it started forming in my head, and i wrote it down really quickly, and that is how it was born.
but, yea. LATERS
vampedtwinkie
Otakuite++ | Posted 12/28/08 | Reply
well this poem was pretty good alot of words i wouldn have used but never the less affective....this was really good and i love vampires so good job!!!
twilight tiger
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/16/08 | Reply
@gaaragirl911:
thanks. i am still a beginnner. can i see samples ofher wwork?
i know. thats why i havent been posting much cards/ wallies. school keeps me busy.
well, hope u enjoy any more future work. Do u have an idea as to when the next chaper of ur story is gonna come out? i cant wait to reaad more...
~Twilight Tiger~
gaaragirl911
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/16/08 | Reply
Awesome....and Beautiful!
You described the her in very well detail. My friend loves to write poems of vampires and such. (but you're much better than her XD)
I'll write a poem soon! (stupid school is keeping me busy! DX)
Surprise me ;]
twilight tiger
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/14/08 | Reply
what? u mean the pictre i put above the VAMPIRE poem, or how i described the feelings of one?
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/14/08 | Reply
Cool portrait of a Vampire!