@frfry:

thank you

i dont care that it didn't rhyme it was great.

@twilight tiger:

yeah, i know how that feels. quiet well actually! haha

@freya42:

ok. i will PM u 2 morrow. k?

i never did a NON rhyming poem before, but when i read over it, i was surprised at how sad i really am. sometimes i just need to look back. ya know?

@Karmira:

thanks i hope things will go a good way for a change

Twilight tiger, rhyming isn't everything. I hope things work out. Very touching poem.

@twilight tiger:

if yoou dont mid telling me, i would like to help :)

and of course!!!! i actually like these types of poems better... i can relate to them alot.

@freya42:

yea. if ya wanna hear more, i will PM you.....

thanks for liking it tho....

awwww! this one is sad/REALLY GOOD! did something happen?