I really like this chapter and it was actually REALLY long! Nice almost-rape scene, by the way. Anyways, it was getting really good and you just left off! But you did make a mistake or two. Towards the end 'Katie had an insight', not 'insite'. And if you wanted her to say that 'it was in the desert', you might have wanted to put that sentence in quotations. I thought that might be your intention. Well, I guess this is my last long comment! I'm sick of writing these thingys (yes, thingys), they take WAY too long! But don't worry, I'll forget and write another next time. Oh, and by the way, the next chapter of my story will definitely be out by Thanksgiving! And you know what? I've been thinking about throwing in an extra chapter because it's been so long! If you're not that interested in it, I'll just post one chapter, but if you want I'll post two! Yay! By the way, this had got to be the longest comment I've EVER written! Bye-bye!