@Katherine Talbot:

well, after such a long time since i haven't written any poetic text, i thought i might give it a try and had so many doubts it'll be alright...even after posting it i was unsecure...but now i'm certain it's not too bad.....thank you Kathy-nee-san

I agree with Amber. I loved the word play very curious. Just love your poems nee.

@AmberTears:

waaaah, thank you.....tried modernist and symbolist elements in this one....without thinking them xD
but once more, arigatou

Word play is superb! Visually intriguing...