@envythejealous:

You did you did :) Thank you for sharing your opinion XD

I really like the background! Nice job! However, I think the text next to the boy's face is a little hard to see. I'd suggest darkening it a bit.
Hope I helped!

@LightFykki:

LOL! I know im so very lucky >3<

Okie Dokie!
I shall take your critic advice =)
Aww! thank you, now i have even more inspiration to get better =)

@Felcie:

Yea that makes sense =)
Ill do that next time k
Yea! That would be cool =)
RAWRHAR! beaches are awesome =D

~ it did help >D
SO thank you very much XD

@SarahPatricia:

HI!
Okay =)

Okay! I shall look out for that next time >D

Thank you so very much for your help =)

I SHALL UPDATE! XD

@kisskiss-bangbang:

Okay

@kisskiss-bangbang:

Oh no problemo!
ll do that the next time i post k =)
Hehe im sorry =)

Oh no problemo... its always nice to be all organized CX

I am not in the ecard section so I won't bother you too much (few lucky you.. XD kidding^^ don't worry, just be free to post anything you want here, every just wants to help ^_^).

You got very nice two comments there which explained basic things you have to look for. So try to organize that text and even if it looks like it is something different with adding it up that much, maybe going with a different texture or background behind it would do the better trick.
Try all possible combination and you will get better and better. I already see that you are as I remember from previous work. :)

I think like SarahPatricia about the lines and the saturation. Make it more soft. And about the background, even if Summer is written, I don't feel like it's summer at all, it looks a bit too cold. Try with less text, the main one is enough and do a brighter BG with warm colors which convey the atmosphere of summer :) Why not adding a beach picture, for example?

There, I hope it helped you! Keep it up.

Hi there !
First of all, since it's your first time, don't take critiques personally :D Some others might seem harsh but they're just trying to build you to become a better artist.

Anyway, the most noticeable thing in your card are the jagged lines. It seems that you've over-sharpened it. try to avoid that next time. Or maybe it's because of the resizing... next, The level of saturation hurts the eyes, or is it my monitor? hmm..
As for the texture, your theme is "summer" so I don't see why you'd use textures.

I think that's all I gotta say for now :D
I hope you'll update :)