I do have to agree on this- the 'gun' looks perfectly fine the size it is. Maybe if you had a more solid letters with less of the spray effect. Anouther little quick thing is on the gun(object not the word) you have those little brown lines along the barrel. I think you could take those out altogeather: it seems a little out of place and distracts a little colour wise.
Don't take my word for it though; I can't make cards very well. It looks really well though, I love the red and the brown togeather! :3
I think "Gun" is absolutely perfect, just the way it is. I'm a huge fan of having one large word with tiny text on the top. The only thing I would change would perhaps be the removal of the star beneath the word 'gun'. I think it doesn't quite fit with the tough-ish kind of look you have going there. This is probably the worst critique you've ever been given, but there really is not much I would change about this card! You've created a lovely piece of work right there. :3
Last edited by Hulaberry32 at 3:33:52 PM CDT on October 30, 2011.
It might look that "Gun" looks too big and not balanced compared to that text above it, so it might look a little better if it was only a bit smaller. But other than that, it is not really much and it fits quite well there.
When it comes to cards or any digital work in general, it is hard to tell critique if not stated of what because everyone has a different approach and different taste in all that. So I can't really say much in detail, but I personally do like this card.
I like the way that you did it and while it might look better if there was a custom made background there, that smoke is still quite fitting. Maybe I would prefer if the colors were more sharp and if the contrast was a little different more on the brighter side, but other than that I think that this card looks pretty nice.^^
kisskiss-bangbang
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/30/11 | Reply
I do have to agree on this- the 'gun' looks perfectly fine the size it is. Maybe if you had a more solid letters with less of the spray effect. Anouther little quick thing is on the gun(object not the word) you have those little brown lines along the barrel. I think you could take those out altogeather: it seems a little out of place and distracts a little colour wise.
Don't take my word for it though; I can't make cards very well. It looks really well though, I love the red and the brown togeather! :3
matt
Hulaberry32
Primadonna (Otaku Legend) | Posted 10/30/11 | Reply
I think "Gun" is absolutely perfect, just the way it is. I'm a huge fan of having one large word with tiny text on the top. The only thing I would change would perhaps be the removal of the star beneath the word 'gun'. I think it doesn't quite fit with the tough-ish kind of look you have going there. This is probably the worst critique you've ever been given, but there really is not much I would change about this card! You've created a lovely piece of work right there. :3
Last edited by Hulaberry32 at 3:33:52 PM CDT on October 30, 2011.
LightFykki
Drachen Herz (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/30/11 | Reply
It might look that "Gun" looks too big and not balanced compared to that text above it, so it might look a little better if it was only a bit smaller. But other than that, it is not really much and it fits quite well there.
When it comes to cards or any digital work in general, it is hard to tell critique if not stated of what because everyone has a different approach and different taste in all that. So I can't really say much in detail, but I personally do like this card.
I like the way that you did it and while it might look better if there was a custom made background there, that smoke is still quite fitting. Maybe I would prefer if the colors were more sharp and if the contrast was a little different more on the brighter side, but other than that I think that this card looks pretty nice.^^