Thank you!! I can't remeber why I chose Kinnu. . . it had something to do with his personality. . . Did u know Mitti means Death? LOL I wanted to show something about the characters with their names. I guess the changing of the names just shows how Durango wants a new life. ^_^
Queen of theO � (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/22/08 | Reply
Hm, your use of vocabulary and grammar is very good but in a way, I see the naming of Durango to Kinnu so unexpectedly quick xD It seems to have a standard plot and I think I can see your descriptions in my mind 8D Keep working on the plot, you want to make it strong, keep feeding it and think of your audience, who do you want to get? x) You don't want to make it varied but you don't also want to make it boring, add in a little spice there now and then and be careful if you want to keep the plot going this way (if there's no action or anything lol) It seems good for a start though ;)
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Otakuite | Posted 03/24/08 | Reply
Thank you!! I can't remeber why I chose Kinnu. . . it had something to do with his personality. . . Did u know Mitti means Death? LOL I wanted to show something about the characters with their names. I guess the changing of the names just shows how Durango wants a new life. ^_^
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Queen of theO � (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/22/08 | Reply
Hm, your use of vocabulary and grammar is very good but in a way, I see the naming of Durango to Kinnu so unexpectedly quick xD It seems to have a standard plot and I think I can see your descriptions in my mind 8D Keep working on the plot, you want to make it strong, keep feeding it and think of your audience, who do you want to get? x) You don't want to make it varied but you don't also want to make it boring, add in a little spice there now and then and be careful if you want to keep the plot going this way (if there's no action or anything lol) It seems good for a start though ;)
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