IF YOU WANT TO ALSO ADD YOUR FICTION....I'LL LET...JUST WRITE TO ME......I NEED FRIENDS ANYHOW......HEH HEH.....O AND YOU PEOPLE NEED TO COMMENT OTHER PEOPLES WORK....SERIOUSLY....DON'T YOU FEEL BETTER WITH COMMENTS...
HERE ARE MY GUEST POSTER(S):
WINGEDFIRE
As naruto sat there in his 4th tail mode, he seemed to try to move. He sat watching his mother just staring at him. She was smiling at him with tears running down her face. "Look at my angel. The only thing in this world that keeps me from drowning in ªŁŁ my pain and sadness."
Naruto seemed to be purring at his mother. He slowly started to pull himself towards his mother. As he started to pull himself towards , Sasuke stepped in front of Naruto "who are you and how do エ know you really are Naruto's real mother?!
SPOILER ALERT! SPOILER ALERT! I MENTIONED THE EIGHT TAIL BEAST IN THIS STORY SO IF NOT UP TO DATE. DON'T READ PAST THE !@#$%^&*&^%$#@!
Sasuke stood in the same stop just staring into Oturan's bright red eyes that seemed to cripple him. Oturan smiled evilly towards him "You seem scared child. Is there something you fear?" he said while slowly walking towards Sasuke.
Sasuke regained his composure and returned Oturan's smile with a blank stare. "How can i be afraid of you when your using another person's power? There is nothing to fear....where did he go?!"
"Look kid i wasn't called the yellow flash for nothing." Oturan said appearing behind Sasuke, taking Naruto away from him. Then with swift kick to the back, he knocked Sasuke into the railing. Placing Naruto gently on the floor, Oturan turned and attacked Sasuke with several punches.
Realizing Oturan's speed surpassed his own, Sasuke tried to use his sharingan to track Oturan's movements, only to find he was moving to fast. "What the hell?! How am i suppose to beat him?!" Slightly panicking, he drove after Naruto only to be tackled by Yamato.
Yamato merely shoved him to the floor. "Think twice before you go after Naruto again." He then locked Sasuke's legs to the floor. Well he tried. Suigetsu had attacked Yamato from behind with his massive sword.
"Hey Sasuke! Lets Leave your boyfriend for now and get the hell out of here!! These guys aren't exactly weaklings!" Suigetsu said baring his sharp fang like teeth at a frighten Naruto.
Karin appeared in front of Naruto with a small bag. "Hey, don't be afraid. Suigetsu is just a big jerk and a loser. Wanna hang out with us?" She said handing Naruto the bag of candy.
"NO! LEAVE ME ALONE!! DADDY, HELP ME!!" Naruto screamed out while running towards Oturan. While he was running towards Oturan, he seemed use the shadow clone jutsu, which made about a dozen little Naruto's appear and jump all over Kakashi(who hadn't moved an inch since seeing Sasuke) and Oturan, causing them to fall over in Naruto's frighten confusion.
"Naruto, please we have to stop them...offf...Narut....DAMN IT!!!" Oturan grew even more frustrated with what was happening. "DO SOMETHING KAKASHI!!! KAKASHI! DON'T JUST GET TRAMPLED YOU IDIOT!! KAKASHI!!" Oturan's screams went unheard being that Kakashi was already standing holding about 7 Naruto's and staring down the student that betrayed him and Team 7.
Sasuke was looking at Kakashi but for some unknown reason, even he didn't understand it, he couldn't look Kakashi in the eyes. He was holding a sleeping Naruto which turned out to be the real Naruto. "We will be back in the morning. I want to talk to him." With that, Sasuke disappeared.
!@#$$%^&**&^%$#@!@#$%^&*
Jugo was sitting on a chair just staring out the window with birds sitting on his shoulders. He slowly turned and stared at Kirabi, who was sleeping soundly next to a iron gate which he was chained to. Suigetsu bursted into the room breathing heavily "Did the eight tailed beast guy escape....Oh he's right there. Has he woken up yet?"
"No. He body is taking a long while to heal. I wonder if anything if wrong. If he dies, Madara will have ours heads."Jugo said blankly.
Sasuke walked into the room and merely nodded toward Jugo. He walked over to Kirabi and placed Naruto next to him. Instantly Naruto Stood up and crawled away from him as if something smelled bad. "Whats wrong, Naru?" Sasuke asked with a soft smile on his face.
Naruto looked up and smiled brightly at Sasuke." Nii-san! Sasu-san!! That man is like Rubi."
Karin looked puzzled "Who in the world is Rubi?" She asked staring at Sasuke.
"That's the Nine-tailed beast the he is the host for. Its name is Kyuubi. I guess he cant pronounce it properly yet. Listen, you three even mention this to anyone of the Akatsuki members. I'll kill you." With that he just started to play with Naruto while Jugo, Karin and Suigetsu just watched.
To everyone's shock, there he was. Naruto's biggest traitor was standing in the doorway, playing pattycake with Naruto. Oturan grew impatience with the fact that
Sasuke was ingoring him. "Look you little bastard, put my kid down and get the hell away from my apartment before I kick you up your ass!" Oturan said turning red.
Kakashi jumped pass Oturan and grabbed Naruto from Sasuke "You better find a hole and bury yourself or Oturan will do it for you." He said not even looking sasuke in the face.
Sasuke merely smirked at Kakashi "He couldn't do anything to me.....what the hell?!" When Sasuke turned around, Oturan was growling and had a chakra tail forming.
"I'll freaking kill you, you traitor! I'll kill you if you ever come near my baby boy ever again!!" Oturan roared after Sasuke who was trembling in the spot he was standing in.
SORRY THE REST WILL BE ADDED LATER. BUT PLEASE SAY WHICH WAY I CAN TURN THIS STORY
