so sad...i felt the snow around me and i just ate but i felt the hunger for food. i think this is amazing
i could feel the story.
make more and i will read them all(or whenever im on)
Oh ok ^^; I just thought you were mad at me for writing it. Glad to know I won't have a flaming mob outside my house any time soon XD Thanks for the comment!
Oh.My.Gosh. I loved that! L is my favorite Death Note character, and I think it's really cool that you wrote a side-story about his past! I love to write side stories, and I have a ton for all my favorite anime and manga. I enjoyreading them almost as much as I enjoy writing them!
I love it!!! It actually, explains quite alot. Speaking on how in the 2nd volume he said "the good guys always win" and smiles. But I feel so bad I need to hug my L plush now. By the way, I cried. ^__^U
This was brilliant. It completely explains why L has such a thirst for justice and everything. Is Soichiro Light's father? Not sure how common the Yagami last name is around there. Nice work though ~ Has a sudden urge to eat some cinnamon rolls since I love pastries ~
That was so sad, I almost cried.. But I used up all my tears on another story.. Ehe.. Sorry.. But I really do like it! Such a sad story that hit me deep. Ah, why did he have to die..?
um....thank you? I had a dream about it, so I wrote it down and asked one of my friends if they would read it. She liked it and told me to publish it on theotaku so more people could enjoy it. I am glad that it went over so well. If you want more of my stories, read 'em from my world Death Note Stuff!!! I have to go so thanks again for giving me such a good review.
Oh. My. God. BEST L STORY EVER WRITTEN EVVVVVVVVVVER!!!!!! I loved this. Poor L..."God spare my child" That was so sweet! I loved the fact that L was inspired by Soichiro. Awesome way of tieing the characters together! You really capture L's past and personality wonderfully. A grand fic made even better up and beyong the call of duty. Loved it. *hugs you* My friends will adore this.
ShyKittin
Otakuite | Posted 01/02/11 | Reply
Some of it reminded me of my childhood DX DX DX and this made me cry.......
moka27
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/14/10 | Reply
oh this is so sad but amazingly writnen
sonji
Otakuite+ | Posted 06/29/10 | Reply
soji u r the truth u r a good story teller i need to learn more about u
gaara is dark
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/21/10 | Reply
so sad...i felt the snow around me and i just ate but i felt the hunger for food. i think this is amazing
i could feel the story.
make more and i will read them all(or whenever im on)
xXdeathXnoteXx
Otakuite | Posted 11/18/09 | Reply
awesome story! i Loved it!
SirLawliet
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/10/09 | Reply
Overall, very nice. I wont criticize you for what you already know.
^-^ But who cares? You got the story across and did a great job with it!
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/09/09 | Reply
@Dlkira:
Sorry but you're looking at the grammar fiend of the Earth righ here hahah. I'm glad you enjoyed it though.
Dlkira
Otakuite | Posted 06/09/09 | Reply
@:
U need more grammar check. However, U demonstrated a curious but almost depressing story. I would give U a 9.
Artistic Wolf
Otakuite | Posted 04/21/09 | Reply
omg...this made me cry...
Kyubi Elric
The Waffle (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/01/09 | Reply
I still think this is an awesome story!! I feel bad for L.
dragonpanda
Otakuite | Posted 02/26/09 | Reply
@SojiRem:
That was good. I wish I knew what actually happened though. *sigh* I love L SOOOOO much poor him
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/17/09 | Reply
@:
Oh ok ^^; I just thought you were mad at me for writing it. Glad to know I won't have a flaming mob outside my house any time soon XD Thanks for the comment!
~Soji
onlyoneonline
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/16/09 | Reply
This is so sad but yet so good, it's so deep i love how you've done it.
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/13/09 | Reply
@:
I'm sorry did you not like it.......
Kyubi Elric
The Waffle (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/28/08 | Reply
Good story!! I tried not to cry.
ShizukoxIchimaru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/27/08 | Reply
@SojiRem:
I'm not after you cuz it was a sad but good story. very saddening, but good.
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/27/08 | Reply
@ShizukoxIchimaru:
I was so emo after writing it, and I was kinda afraid to publish it and have all the L fans after me for it.
Last edited by SojiRem at 11:11:19 AM EDT on September 27, 2008.
ShizukoxIchimaru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/27/08 | Reply
@SojiRem:
I-I-I'm still sad and its Saturday Dx
but yes thank you for writing it.
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/26/08 | Reply
@ShizukoxIchimaru:
It made me emo to write it, but I am glad you liked it.
ShizukoxIchimaru
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/26/08 | Reply
i am still crying and i read that half an hour ago... p-p-poor L-kun real good though... V_V
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/19/08 | Reply
@Junketsu Bampaya:
Arigato I enjoyed writing about L-sama. I like him a lot. I've also written stories about Matt and others in my Death Note Stuff world
Junketsu Bampaya
Otakuite | Posted 09/19/08 | Reply
Oh.My.Gosh. I loved that! L is my favorite Death Note character, and I think it's really cool that you wrote a side-story about his past! I love to write side stories, and I have a ton for all my favorite anime and manga. I enjoyreading them almost as much as I enjoy writing them!
XxKiraxCookiexX
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/22/08 | Reply
no problem your really good at these!
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/21/08 | Reply
@XxKiraxCookiexX:
^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's always nice when ppl comment.
XxKiraxCookiexX
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/21/08 | Reply
I love it!!! It actually, explains quite alot. Speaking on how in the 2nd volume he said "the good guys always win" and smiles. But I feel so bad I need to hug my L plush now. By the way, I cried. ^__^U
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/17/08 | Reply
@Madison2294:
Thank you. I thought a lot about it before i wrote it. I like L's mommy....She's so kind
Last edited by SojiRem at 4:12:33 PM EDT on August 17, 2008.
Madison2294
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/17/08 | Reply
i love it!!! it fits perfectly and explains soooo much!!!
DarkSapphire
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/29/08 | Reply
What a GREAT story!!! Poor L fulled w/sadness but then confidence n determination AWESOMENESS!!
blackyuna
Otakuite+ | Posted 07/25/08 | Reply
i love this story... I hope you don't mind kinda featured this on my blog/world........ i want cinnamon rolls now...
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/24/08 | Reply
@Magnus Lensherr:
Yes Soichiro is Light's dad...that was my intent anyway...
Magnus Lensherr
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/24/08 | Reply
This was brilliant. It completely explains why L has such a thirst for justice and everything. Is Soichiro Light's father? Not sure how common the Yagami last name is around there. Nice work though ~ Has a sudden urge to eat some cinnamon rolls since I love pastries ~
Dranz
XXXchad
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/22/08 | Reply
awww man im a guy and i almost cried but knowing how much my friends luv L they would've been in tears....thts awsome
Kiritsuko
Otakuite+ | Posted 07/21/08 | Reply
That was so sad, I almost cried.. But I used up all my tears on another story.. Ehe.. Sorry.. But I really do like it! Such a sad story that hit me deep. Ah, why did he have to die..?
PuppylovePyro
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/20/08 | Reply
Something about depressing stories that I like...
gaaralovesyou123
Otakuite+ | Posted 07/20/08 | Reply
thats so sad but an amazing story 5/5
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/20/08 | Reply
@lazyweird1:
um....thank you? I had a dream about it, so I wrote it down and asked one of my friends if they would read it. She liked it and told me to publish it on theotaku so more people could enjoy it. I am glad that it went over so well. If you want more of my stories, read 'em from my world Death Note Stuff!!! I have to go so thanks again for giving me such a good review.
lazyweird1
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/20/08 | Reply
Oh. My. God. BEST L STORY EVER WRITTEN EVVVVVVVVVVER!!!!!! I loved this. Poor L..."God spare my child" That was so sweet! I loved the fact that L was inspired by Soichiro. Awesome way of tieing the characters together! You really capture L's past and personality wonderfully. A grand fic made even better up and beyong the call of duty. Loved it. *hugs you* My friends will adore this.
shadow princess
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 07/19/08 | Reply
omg THAT WAS SO PRETTY and awesome i loved it ..it would explain L's love for sweets *claps* great job
kima75
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/19/08 | Reply
OMG!!! that made me want 2 cry. But what also cought my eye was the officers name! Thats so sad!
gaaragirl911
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/19/08 | Reply
Love it! I always thought something like that actually happened to L...
Surprise me ;]
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/19/08 | Reply
The story was cute and sad at parts makes me sad.
Sorry I didn't comment earlier, but it didn't come up I think because I was in camp.
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 07/18/08 | Reply
Heya, just saw your story in the Fan Word submissions.
Tell ya what: if you can modify/edit this, put full line spaces between the paragraphs, I can publish this for ya.
Is that okay?
Haven Relis
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/17/08 | Reply
Awwwww, poor L. Really good story.