@littlepooch:

Yoru: *turns to cock an eyebrow at Eric* I'm mean to everyone. I just like dogs. An yes me calling u chute was a compliment.

Me:....I like him all cute w the puppy...but he's supposed to b a cold sarcastic seductive b*stard -3-

@Eiri Yuki s Lover:

Me: :0 I know! He's so different..

Eric: ;-; He's just mean to me I guess..

Me: ... Cause he called you cute?

Eric: *nods*

Me: Isn't that compliment XD

Eric: o0o' Really?

@littlepooch:

Yoru: *shrugs* oh well ^//^ hehe he's just like a regular doggie then *still petting and scratching Train*

Me: if he jeeps being cute I might die o///o

@Eiri Yuki s Lover:

Train: *whines*

No: ;3; He can understand you, but he can't speak... Just bark and whine and growl.

@littlepooch:

Yoru: *looks into Train's eyes*....do u talk? *looks at Poochy* can he talk? *scratching Train behind ears*

@Eiri Yuki s Lover:

Train: ^.^ *loves being around people and getting petted*

Me: x3 Nawwww, he's so cute <3

Eric: :I Whatever

@littlepooch:

Yoru: ^//^ hehe doggie! *is so happy*

Me: s..so...cute o//o an Eric-Kun u'll get used to Yoru's annoyingness.

Yoru: *not listening cause he's playing with Train*

@Eiri Yuki s Lover:

Eric: >//< *gets so frustrated with Yoru*

Train: ^^ *likes being petted*

Me: Wow, Train, you sure got the hang of acting like a dog down quickly...

Train: *growls at me before turning back and licking Yoru's face*

Me: .............

Train: Woof ^.^

@littlepooch:

Yoru: *cocks eyebrow* I care why? *eyes get big when he sees the dog* PUPPY!!! *huggles the dog and stats petting it*

Me:...uh...he likes...dogs...0///0 this is his cute side...we must record this moment! *pulls out video camera*

@Eiri Yuki s Lover:

Me: x3 *loves fluffy looking wings*

Eric: >e< But that's not my nammmeeee!

Me: Maybe he can make friends with my puppy (My new OC that I forgot to post the profile for XD;;)

Puppy (Train): ...Woofffff! ^-^ *wags tail*

Me: :D Puppy!! <3

@:

Yoru:....0//<.....pretty...an...fluffy.......

Me: Lolz yes me toos ^^ he will b adorable!

Yoru:....>//< whatever

@littlepooch:

Yoru: *likes the attention an extends wings more*

Me: *shakes head*

Yoru: *smiles at Eric* Yeah you're the cutie. Got a problem with that? Caaaause I don't care. I'll call you all whatever I want. ^^

Me:....he's never gonna make friends like this

@CipherPol:

Lol yeah ^^; Demons said I should try splitting up into more paragraphs >//> I always forget though..but I'm tryin ta fix my bad habit hehe

@:

Lol yeah ^^

Yoru: I'm not sweet -_- or cute...or any other nice term you think of

Me:....u can b cute Q_Q I jus haven't given u a cute part yet

Yoru:.....what part of my form makes you think I can b cute?

Me:....u hav angel wings an ur really pretty. If u were really bad don't cha think u'd of been ugly?

Eric: *spit takes and dies* Cutie!? >///<

Me: XD Nice post, Eiri! ;3; And poor Yoru! *huggls Yoru and pets his wings again* fluffy.... <3

Lol Eiri i didnt even know this was you till i saw your name! y? PARAGRAPHS *squee*
ehem, i'm retarded

@Eiri Yuki s Lover:

Much! :)

@DemonsandAngels:

I tried breaking it up. Does it look better? :)

@Eiri Yuki s Lover:

I know what you mean!

@Hulaberry32:

Me: yeah me too :)

Yoru: I've already stated that I'm not here to make friends. Besides I trust you bought as far as I can throw ya -_- you're like me. You're out for revenge and you'll backstab anyone who gets in your way *eyes Tomatsu* cept him I guess

Me:....I'll make u hav friends sooner or later -3- so prepare urself

@DemonsandAngels:

I've heard that from someone else too. It's something I've been meaning to work on ^^; it's hard to break habits thought hehe. But thank u ^^ I'll try to keep that in mind next time I post

HB32: I think Yoru and Akuma would get along fantastically. XD

Akuma: As if. I don't get along with freakshows with fangs.

HB32: I'm not even going to bother pointing out that your own brother has giant wings. *facepalm*

May I make a suggestion?
You are a good writer, but it would be so much easier to read this if you broke it into paragraphs. It's hard to follow along when there is a huge block, you know?
Just some constructive criticism. :)