IT seems that you haven't added more but still I like this story and I'm wondering what's going to happen next. I think it would make a fine manga once you are finished with it.

@phantomgirl21:

I'm glad you like it thus far! (I hate cliffhangers as well, especially if you have to read a book in class, but you have to stop, it makes me want to go like this: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!)

@scoodi:

YAYAY! I shall edit that now~ Thank you, 'cause you know my problems with knowing where to end paragraphs, XD

STOP TORTURING ME WITH THIS!!! AHHHHHH!!! I WANT TO KNOW MORE!!!! CURSE THE CLIFF HANGERS!!!

GREAT STORY SO FAR THOUGH. KEEP GOING. KEEP GOING!

VAMPY PHANTOM

Oh, I absolutely LOVE it! <3 <3 Do write more, please.

And if I could make one little suggestion, use the enter key to its fullest. Any time someone else talks, press enter. Any time there are a bunch of sentences in a row (I know in normal writing, those are paragraphs. But in fanfiction, you can just click 'enter'), or if you want to use it for effect, click 'enter'.

It just makes it a whole lot easier to read. ^^

cool. and yes i do like it a lot. now i'm on my way to reading it. i'll let you know what i think. take care.

vampy phantom

@phantomgirl21:

YAY! New chapter~ (I'm glad you like it, this is probably gonna' be one of my best fanfictions~ )

oh dev-chan i have been left feeling empty now. i want to know what's going to happen. keep it coming. i like it so far!!

take care.

vampy phantom

@phantomgirl21:

New chapter!!!!! ^-^ YAY! (XD Yes, it's another cliffhanger~ )

and i shall read it!

@phantomgirl21:

^-^ Thank you! I shall post another tomorrow~

now you've got me wondering what's going to happen. cool first chapter. i'll be back to read the rest.