Reaally good although i am nnot to big a fan of ten/sasu. I like how with each point you had a little explination on it. It was very good and your wrighting is some of the best that i have read in a while.
I understand completely, and it's perfectly fine. There are younger members and sometimes children who look through this site daily so any more than what I have written would be too much for innocent eyes. I'll remember to keep that in mind the next time I submit something.
For the most part, my writing doesn't go further than this so you've nothing to worry about. But it's really great to know where my limits are, so thank you. ^___^
Oh, and I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the fic. ♥
I've no doubt a fair number of people are gonna love this fic.
That said, you'll probably notice where I put the scissors to your work. I really had no problem with those bits (aside from what I thought were kinda corny euphemisms), but some others might not be quite as forgiving. So yeah, for purposes of the site and for future reference, this is probably about as far as I'll let these go for publication. I hope that's okay for you at least for now.
That said, your writing is still as excellent as ever.
ManaTatsumiya
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/22/09 | Reply
Good story. Sasuten, huh?
Marayumasan
Otakuite | Posted 05/29/08 | Reply
ooooh juicy
Gaarabeachbum
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/26/08 | Reply
wow...that was rather naughty..... U BAD BAD GIRL!!!!
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/01/08 | Reply
real good story^^
Akisama
Otakuite | Posted 04/30/08 | Reply
Reaally good although i am nnot to big a fan of ten/sasu. I like how with each point you had a little explination on it. It was very good and your wrighting is some of the best that i have read in a while.
DragonStorm
Senior Otaku | Posted 04/29/08 | Reply
@SomeGuy:
I understand completely, and it's perfectly fine. There are younger members and sometimes children who look through this site daily so any more than what I have written would be too much for innocent eyes. I'll remember to keep that in mind the next time I submit something.
For the most part, my writing doesn't go further than this so you've nothing to worry about. But it's really great to know where my limits are, so thank you. ^___^
Oh, and I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the fic. ♥
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 04/29/08 | Reply
I've no doubt a fair number of people are gonna love this fic.
That said, you'll probably notice where I put the scissors to your work. I really had no problem with those bits (aside from what I thought were kinda corny euphemisms), but some others might not be quite as forgiving. So yeah, for purposes of the site and for future reference, this is probably about as far as I'll let these go for publication. I hope that's okay for you at least for now.
That said, your writing is still as excellent as ever.