Yeah i like your style of writing. Interesting topic too, keep it up! I don't think you'd have to re-write it at all, just check it is layed out the way you want and double check for spelling errors. I find that getting someone else to read things through helps, they can often find things you missed.
I love it! It's so inspiring! (inspiring what? I dunno. :D)
Those poor grandparents, they must be rolling in their graves wondering what they raised. And Addie the shy girl initiates sex. xD Totally could happen. Also I think it was really truthful how a gay man and a lesbian could get that close cause dude, love's in personality. Can't wait to see the next update.
Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/06/08 | Reply
Yeah i like your style of writing. Interesting topic too, keep it up! I don't think you'd have to re-write it at all, just check it is layed out the way you want and double check for spelling errors. I find that getting someone else to read things through helps, they can often find things you missed.
SpiffySporkPerson
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/05/08 | Reply
I love it! It's so inspiring! (inspiring what? I dunno. :D)
Those poor grandparents, they must be rolling in their graves wondering what they raised. And Addie the shy girl initiates sex. xD Totally could happen. Also I think it was really truthful how a gay man and a lesbian could get that close cause dude, love's in personality. Can't wait to see the next update.