a short poem i wrote,Nothing special,please tell me what you think!
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A scar a scar,i see a shooting star,
i wish for a cure i wish for a chance,
i wish that to my face people would glance,
A burn spreads through my repulsing face,
disfigured and useless like a broken vase,
An injury of injustice an injury of hate
An injury caused by greed and ambitious debate
I pray i pray,every night and day,
Oh take me lord,oh take me away
Bring an end to my misery and dismay
I liked her i liked her lots
but how can she like a face so grotesque
How can she like someone so horribly unique
I bulked up my courage and went in a hurry
i covered my face with a mask and planned my ultimate task
I brought her flowers and we talked for hours,
a miracle it was she accepted my personality
"that mask of yours is something of originality"
She hints,and tips, for me to remove my disguise
but how can i even look her in the eyes?
My face is wretched,my smile is crooked
But she did accept my psyche
my hands shake with disbelief
I remove the mask and pull the curtains
she stutters for a moment,of her reaction i am uncertain
She puts a hand on my face,I'm surprised and confused at the case
She says she fell in love with me,but how can she love a mutilated carcass?!
I ask her for a mirror and as i look at the reflection,i am filled with misconception
My face is refined,my face is cured,after everything I've endured
I jump in joy and let out a cheerful laughter,
"My wish came true! my wish came true!"
"my torn up face came back anew!"
"thank you god,you gave me a chance"
"i am so happy i think i'm gonna dance!"
*input harlem shake sequence here*