your poems are so...heart aching. but so confusing. it says, he took her love with him and she as well kept his. she wanted her love back, but why? was it because she felt that there was no "love"between them? but even if that were the case, they both walked away with each others love, maybe the love was just small things that they could remember the other by.

i don't understand the gist of the poem. many couplesjust walk away, especially when there is great potential between the two. but why did they walk away from each other? the poem is consistent, yes,but i feel asif i was missing a piece of this picture.

i liked the poem, don't get me wrong, its a very nice piece of art, but I felt that i was missing something.

~Good Days to You~