the twins have the same names as the twins in DNAngel but I'm not critizing. their names are similar to their father Riku, right? Anyway its looking good keep up the good work!
Thanks for inviting me to read your fan fiction... Though i'm not familiar with the anime, i love how you write this one. The words were strictly chosen to add more spice to the story.
hope to see more stories from you
Last edited by yann0 at 2:00:01 AM EDT on October 24, 2009.
They're just the names I gave them, derived from Riku, if you have noticed. Actually, I have a win pic of solomon, saya and hagi in my pc...as in, saya looks like a princess seated on a throne, on her right side is hagi dressed in victorian style black suit, while solomon is dressed in a white suit of almost similar make, it's all just lovely!
Nice. Still i gotta say Solomon & Saya Forever!!!! I'm a Solomon fan & was devastated when he died, but seriously this was good. Is Rika & Risa their real names or did u give them this. Eitherway good job.
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/28/09 | Reply
I love this story! The way you describe Saya and Hagi's love was soo beautiful and true to their character. When Hagi feeds her blood and Saya doesn't let the kiss end, startling Hagi, was amazingly tender. I especially love it when Hagi sweeps her off her feet and flies away with her. Romantic, touching and passionate in one story. Fantastic job!!
hehehe....just stopping by.. wow! you have lots of comments..hehehe... i really like and love your stories...hehehe( i think that you already know that)... and uhmm... don't forget the memo that you wriet to your self during class..hehehesee ya!
Haha! Yeah, maybe he'll poke you,but I doubt that he'll be speaking anything at at all! After all in the anime, he's just "Saya..." and "Fight...", I think the only time he was able to say a whole paragraph is in episode 52!
Haha, Hagi is one of my bishie crushes, there's just something so sexy with a guy who just keeps on murmuring your name...*imagines Hagi whispering in my ears* KYAAA!
The Waffle (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/27/09 | Reply
This is really good. Sounds more romantic in the begining then it gets to more casual stuff, but I like it. Though I've never heard of the characters, what series are they from?
is Rika interested in Haji?... oh well its ok, Haji still likes Saya the most, i mean LOVE... hehehe.. nice work!!! can't wait for the next 1....hehehe...btw, uhmm... how can i join?.....
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 11/02/09 | Reply
@Artgrrl:
They do, don['t they? I just noticed! Yeah, but in DNAngel, the long-haired girl is Risa, but theshort-haired one is Riku right?
Artgrrl
ETERNITY (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/01/09 | Reply
the twins have the same names as the twins in DNAngel but I'm not critizing. their names are similar to their father Riku, right? Anyway its looking good keep up the good work!
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/26/09 | Reply
@:
Thanks! Glad you understand.
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/24/09 | Reply
@yann0:
Thanks for your patronage!
yann0
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/24/09 | Reply
Thanks for inviting me to read your fan fiction... Though i'm not familiar with the anime, i love how you write this one. The words were strictly chosen to add more spice to the story.
hope to see more stories from you
Last edited by yann0 at 2:00:01 AM EDT on October 24, 2009.
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/22/09 | Reply
@:
Hmmm, maybe I can do it! But it won't be prompt, I'm quite busy with schoolwork right now. Can you wait until I'm quite free?
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/22/09 | Reply
@:
Don't worry, I got the gist of it!
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/21/09 | Reply
@:
Oooh, I wanna see her! Did you post your drawing?
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/16/09 | Reply
@minato88:
They're just the names I gave them, derived from Riku, if you have noticed. Actually, I have a win pic of solomon, saya and hagi in my pc...as in, saya looks like a princess seated on a throne, on her right side is hagi dressed in victorian style black suit, while solomon is dressed in a white suit of almost similar make, it's all just lovely!
minato88
Otakuite | Posted 10/16/09 | Reply
Nice. Still i gotta say Solomon & Saya Forever!!!! I'm a Solomon fan & was devastated when he died, but seriously this was good. Is Rika & Risa their real names or did u give them this. Eitherway good job.
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/14/09 | Reply
@:
Gee, thanks a lot!
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/14/09 | Reply
@syafiqahchan:
Haha, thanks!
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/14/09 | Reply
@:
Yes, he's a vamp, with bat wings and claws to make things cooler! They're actually from the anime Blood+, have you watched it?
syafiqahchan
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 10/14/09 | Reply
I like your world!(daisuki)
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/29/09 | Reply
@Karmira:
Aha! So you've also reviewed my story on Fanfiction.net. Thanks!
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/28/09 | Reply
I love this story! The way you describe Saya and Hagi's love was soo beautiful and true to their character. When Hagi feeds her blood and Saya doesn't let the kiss end, startling Hagi, was amazingly tender. I especially love it when Hagi sweeps her off her feet and flies away with her. Romantic, touching and passionate in one story. Fantastic job!!
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/19/09 | Reply
@t3raposa:
Thanks! I love writing, but I also like animals, so I'll be a veterinary writer!
t3raposa
Otakuite | Posted 09/18/09 | Reply
I read and write for a (meager...) living, and this is beautiful!
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/04/09 | Reply
@:
Thanks a lot!
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/29/09 | Reply
@:
You SHOULD watch it, it's awesome!
meirin
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/29/09 | Reply
hehehe....just stopping by.. wow! you have lots of comments..hehehe... i really like and love your stories...hehehe( i think that you already know that)... and uhmm... don't forget the memo that you wriet to your self during class..hehehesee ya!
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/28/09 | Reply
@:
Haha! Yeah, maybe he'll poke you,but I doubt that he'll be speaking anything at at all! After all in the anime, he's just "Saya..." and "Fight...", I think the only time he was able to say a whole paragraph is in episode 52!
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/28/09 | Reply
@:
Haha, Hagi is one of my bishie crushes, there's just something so sexy with a guy who just keeps on murmuring your name...*imagines Hagi whispering in my ears* KYAAA!
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/27/09 | Reply
@Timcanpy14:
Thankie!
Timcanpy14
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/26/09 | Reply
I like how it was kind of a mystery who Saya was in the beginning. And I love how you described things.
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/25/09 | Reply
@alliekittie:
Thanks so much!
alliekittie
Otakuite | Posted 08/25/09 | Reply
I love it alot it is very good and awesome
1dev13
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/25/09 | Reply
Yep, no prob, I love reading stories on here! :D
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/25/09 | Reply
@1dev13:
Thanks so much!
1dev13
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/25/09 | Reply
I loved it! :D 5 stars! Perfect Score! And 2 thumbs up! :D
brooklynxpk
Otakuite | Posted 08/23/09 | Reply
@theantitype:
nice...
ill be looking forward.
theantitype
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/23/09 | Reply
@brooklynxpk:
Yup! I'm currently working on Chapter 2...just wait a bit, I'll be posting it soon!
brooklynxpk
Otakuite | Posted 08/21/09 | Reply
honestly, you have the talent of really writing a novel..way better..
I like it..very romantic and intricately explained like every sentence really mattered a lot..
oh..yay..when i noticed that it was blood +, surely, this will be an awesome continuation..^_^
you're good. are you planning on continuing this one?
aoi bara
The Shadow (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/04/09 | Reply
yay! blood+ fanfic, great! i really like this series and was hoping for another season. but i guess this can be the new season then! good job!
Goku s girl
Senior Otaku | Posted 07/27/09 | Reply
Wow really cool i loved reading it! The romance was so .....HOT! I love it excellent job!!
Kyubi Elric
The Waffle (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/27/09 | Reply
This is really good. Sounds more romantic in the begining then it gets to more casual stuff, but I like it. Though I've never heard of the characters, what series are they from?
meirin
Otakuite++ | Posted 07/26/09 | Reply
is Rika interested in Haji?... oh well its ok, Haji still likes Saya the most, i mean LOVE... hehehe.. nice work!!! can't wait for the next 1....hehehe...btw, uhmm... how can i join?.....