Very interesting Keome-chan. You're a very good writer. ^^
A bit sad, but I like it. One thing I may have done was add something at the end to emphasize what he said and center this piece on it, as though it stuck with her, like her thinking "Everyone smiles when the flowers are in bloom...huh?" And have her smile gently.
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Sleeping Dragon (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/24/10 | Reply
Very interesting Keome-chan. You're a very good writer. ^^
A bit sad, but I like it. One thing I may have done was add something at the end to emphasize what he said and center this piece on it, as though it stuck with her, like her thinking "Everyone smiles when the flowers are in bloom...huh?" And have her smile gently.
LOL Random...ok, sorry. Anyway, Nice. ^^
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Otaku Legend | Posted 03/12/10 | Reply
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In a good or bad way? Hopefully good>.<
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