can't wait to rea the second chapter... i'm sure it'll be great love you

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i know... but outside opinions will help me shape this... but the over all story line will still be mine... i might keep the whole thing as chapter one and keep my chapter 2 short... in fact... i know the perfect part for a quick chapter clif hanger!!! ^_^

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hmmm... i don't know... maybe it could be broken into two chapters...

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you don't have to edit it if you don't want to... but i'm hopeing that one day this could be a real book... so that is why its so long

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yeah i need an editor because evertime i read it i see it the way it should be, because i already know what it should be... so it looks right to me... i need someone to edit it