Test run: give me feedback, please!

HEY GUYS! So I finally got around to making this fashion world thing. It's still not done yet, because I NEED YOUR HELP! *u* If you want to help out, please go through the world's intro, guidelines, and other stuff in the navigation and find stuff that you have questions/feedback on. And then. Put those questions and feedback HERE.
Yeah. I just need some feedback on how this world reads/looks/whatever before I make it official. I'll change stuff up based on the questions and feedback I receive, and try to make this group as good as I can make it. ;0; And then, I'll make it official and stuff and people can join! Yeah!

Sorry for the kind of haphazard post. I kinda woke up not too long ago, haha. xD;

ALRIGHT.
FASHION WORLD TEST RUN: GO.

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