@VWBSZWAS:

Exactly! I'm glad you understand that!

@XxXWinXGirlXxX:

Yeah me too, it also makes it feel like they bothered to look at what you did, good job, is awesome but if you get comments that actually refer to what happened it's so much better.
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@VWBSZWAS:

thanks! I enjoy the criticism! I like criticism rather than the just saying good job! It means a lot because I know what people like and what I need to work on!

Interesting, i like the surise bit at the end it gives her more depth and makes her more real ^-^ cant wait for your next chapter (whick you can post whenever you like)

Sorry it took me so long to comment, i forgot to check here for ages and i've been so busy. *sigh* stupid school.

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ok, thanks! I appreciate the criticism!

@EoAA:

Ya, that sounds good!

I gotta idea. You said that the vamp explodergaterized into dust, so I thought that maybe only one type/clan of vamps do. The rest "die" like mortals(humans)