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Sigh.... true...true

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Ours isn't, and it sucks!

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Wow! That's really cool about your school playing at the rose bowl. Very impressive. I'm from a small town high school. There is no hope of us ever being that good.
And your friend that is like Ed, totally cool!

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lol, probably, though

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lol. wow! he sounds like a cool kid

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Man, I wish our school had done that! That would have worked out so well!

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lol. Poor guy! But that is really funny!

@VWBSZWAS:

Ya, it was for me too! It was my least favorite year

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Wish i could do that

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It was our end of semester exam, so everything we'd covered that semester. It was also worth 40% of our final mark.

@XxXWinXGirlXxX:

Me too, yr 11 is so hard!

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lol. Ok, I'll try! ^^

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I try! But it keeps getting back up and trying to kill me!!!!!

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I can't embrace it! It hates me, that is what I have figured out! Chem hates me!

@VWBSZWAS:

Lol, man, that's kinda funny! My mom used to do that for us too! I miss the good old days when I didn't have to study to get good grades!

@XxXWinXGirlXxX:

Chem just seems to be one of the (few) things i have some natural talent for. That said, i did horrible on my last exam, 54% the sad thing was that that was the highest mark in the class. XD it confused the heck out of my mum 'cause she usually rewards us for doing really well in something, like getting the highest score, and tells us off if we do really badly, like getting 54%. LOLZ

@VWBSZWAS:

lol. I didn't realize there were so many posts! Wow!

But that sounds like a really interesting major! I wish I understood chem! I have never taken it before and it's a struggle! And I have Chem lab for two hours, which doesn't help!

Thanks! Hopefully I'll get my chapter up soon!

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Gottcha! I have a feeling Chem won't be so fun when you get older. I hate it!!!!! >-<

@EoAA:

I like those ideas and I'll use them for next chapter! Thanks!

@XxXWinXGirlXxX:

randomly going through the most recent posts and i saw this had 25 comments so i thought i'd read them ^-^

Your doing biology? That's pretty cool though i don't do human biology myself and i like chemistry, mainly 'cause i find it easy to get good marks, not 'cause it's fun.

When i go to university i'm plaaning to study forensic science and gentetics, so at least 6 years. But i still have anouther year of highschool left before then (i'm in year 11).

Well bye for now *huggles*
i can't wait for you next chapter ^-^

Great chapter! This shows a bit about ana and how she acts. I thought of a way which you could stretch it out. first... add random bits of seemingly unimportant description in. It also adds colour and life. Second... add a few events in, maybe there was a random barfight ect. thats all ^_^ hopefully you can use this.
*huggles*<<<<< i huggle everyone don't take it personally

YAY!!!! i have chocolate... *munches on the chocolate*

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whoa! Talk about devotion! 10 years *Whistles* I'm in for 7ish, which is still pretty long, but not as long as yours.

I hate chemistry! With a passion!

How many years do you have before go to college? If you don't mind my asking

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lol. I joke that I am the uncoordinated coordinated person (You know, like the dumbest smart person) lol.

And, I'm majoring in Biology- Pre physical therapy

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lol. Yep! I'm a freshmen in college. And we joke that my roommate is a ninja because she is so small and awesome. lol

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I love chocolate milk. Now I want some too! But I don't have any in the dorm! *Insert whine*
Look what you did to me! lol

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Hahaha LMAO! That's pretty good! Kinda ironic!

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maybe a little random ^^ But it is all good! random is good!

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ROTFL. That's really funny! And yes, that is what he is doing.
Ed is pretty awesome, but Mustang is better!

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lol! Thanks! I thought so too!
Your avitar is pretty saweet too!

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Thanks! I appreciate that!

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Thanks! ^^ I really like this format about talking about things people need to improve on! It works well!

@VWBSZWAS:

Thanks for criticism. I appreciate it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Great!
Good;
Bringing her past into the story is going to make it much more exciting ^-^ can't wait to see where it goes.
Gaveome more insight into her life which is awesome
Improve;
This is a lot harder than i thought. Maybe length? Though i know sometimes it's impossible to write more thatn you already have. And you had alot in this chapter.

Can't wait to read more ^-^

See ya *huggles*