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thankies!

trish

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well, that's gud for ya! XD

hehe ur rite, thanks lolz

trish

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thankies vix!! XD *hugs* that's some really good advice and i'll take it! XD thankies!! *hugs* but that problem ish, i dont know what to do for the next chapter lolz

trish

@sakurasista:

hehe, thanks ^-^

@VWBSZWAS:

yeah lolz
thankies, and i think ur chapters r gud XD

trish

@sakurasista:

Well practice makes perfect. Lolz
I sucked at the beginning and while i'm nowhere ner perfect now, i've definatly improved

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thankies! oh, don't worry, i'll try and um describe a bit more on my nxt chapter lolz

trish

@VWBSZWAS:

thankies!! XD yeah, i seriously need to work on my descriptions lolz

live life,laugh lots,lOvE forever~

trish

A bit more descripting would be good. But other wise it's really good.
Can't wait to read more ^-^