@AvariceTears:

Mmmkay..can't wait for your challenge to end so you can write more! I LOOOVE writing stories! xD

@Morbid Dollie:

i know right!? ha ha ha. i'll be explaining more of that later in my book.

-Avarice-

Who'd ever guess someone so evil would be afraid of death! O_o

@:

Yes. but i think it is a good thing to focus on them because that way you can better learn about who you are writing about, ha ha ha.

Aw, i'm sure you'll start writing sooner or later.

-Avarice-

@Estheryuki:

Meh, very busy! ha ha ha. I dont have time for anything anymore it's kind of a hassel but I enjoy it...to an extend, rawr! ha ha ha.

I know I dont even know why I started writing anymore. It's mainly because of you and two other members on this site, ha ha ha. But yeah, mainly because of you because you reminded me of this character and what not. If this book were to ever be published, if ever finished, I would totally dedicate it to yous!

You work!???

-Avarice-

@:

Wow, you really like it that much! Ack, hearing that from such a great writer just fills me with so much happiness! Thankyou so very much! ha ha ha.

I am currently working on chapter two...ack, it is coming along very slowly.

I am also glad to hear that you love the Character Kapranova! I am currently obsessed with him as well, ack!

-Avarice-

@Estheryuki:

Oh my god! You actually read my story! ha ha ha ha! Thankyou so so much! I am really glad you like the story, and gah...I havent heard from you in like forever! How´s it been?

-Avarice-

@AvariceTears:

*confused*

@saekimidori:

okay okay...you are ...what's the word, I think it's implying the idea.

-Avarice-

^^ wow im amazed again, it done nicely told in a profound way of a sense you found a diary looking directly thro his eyes seeing what he sees trying to understand how he felt like the detail you give alowing us to have a visual of something maybe a panel or page image^^

i read it class forgetting where i was and my teacher passed by and yelled at me for not doing anything and read it him self said its on a collage level with work on the wording he see's a ""potenial"" release in the future

anywho looking forward to the next entry^^

@AvariceTears:

Who said I don't like it? I don't remember saying that. I think you're imagining things. O_o

@saekimidori:

Yes it will be a slow process of becoming slowing swalloed up by the evil overtaking him, but I suppose it is worth the wait to see the blood shed invisioned in your mind.

Sorry, I know you dont like this dark stuff but I cant help it! Ack! Things just come out they way they do, ha ha ha.

-Avarice-

@Teapot Domescam:

Yeah no worries I´m working on that in the next chapter, ha ha ha.

-Avarice-

@AvariceTears:

um..the descreption of things? xDD I learned that in school and the teacher said that delineation means description xD it's περιγραφή in greek XDDDDD

oh that's great!! it feels awesome when a teacher says to you something like that! ;) that's really nice!! congrats :D :D

It'll be ugly when he releases those feelings, won't it... =<

It's really good again, but I think people would understand it more if you wrote how he came upon the prince and the princess. I mean, it's good and all how it is, but I feel there should be more background to it.

XOXO

@xXWhitePhoenix:

I dont even know what delineation means! XD!!!

But yes, I am feeling a lot better about my writing today because my college reading teacher just now told me that she loved my writing, and that was just the literary report that she read! ha ha ha.

I am very greatful you read my story! And I am more greatful that you enjoyed it! ha ha ha.

-Avarice-

Wow! This is so interesting!!!! I love your writing!! I didn't had the chance to read the second part earlier, when you posted it but now I am amused!! You've got some pretty awesome writing!! and I love your delineation :D :D (I don't know if I said this right xDD )