It's good that you have now a chapter in the princess' narration, because I was kind of curious as to what was going on in her head, exactly.
And I wonder what's going to happen? =O
P.S. I find something useful for your challenge... Hehehe. X3
I'm a bit behind with reading this... I have to say though, it is very enjoyable! I'd say this is one of the best stories i've read on theOtaku. I haven't read this latest chapter yet, but my eyes hurt... I'll save it for tomorrow *smiles*
Ha ha ha, dont worry i am already planning on that situation...on the night of the death, aherm herm. It is actually probably going to happen a lot more in the story to. Like with this situation of her memories and what not. I cant leave Reyles in the shadows about this event, he is obviously going to be furious.
Uh...i actually hated this chapter. I felt it was too rushed and i dont know, it was hard for me to get into Yelena's character without exaggerating it. There is more information on her reaction towards Kapranova's proposal in the fith chapter believe me, and i am working on it.
Ha ha ha, so no worries my love I am already aware of what needs to be done.
I dont think i'm going to be anymore point of views for a while though. I think it's fine the way it is. The King will show himself through others since he is pretty much mentioned through all the different points of views of the characters. Based on their views of him you can get a pretty good understanding of what kind of man he is.
I am going to try to work more on the queen to. I like her character and i want to show more of it in the upcoming chapters. Also my new character, Jacobi, still needs to be introduced into the story...aherm herm, Kapranova's assistant, lol. It's all coming, just keep in mind that this is barely the fourth chapter, ((snort chuckle)) :-B
Thankyou so much for reading and giving me feedback. It really helps me plan my chapters better in the future. Thankyou.
Ha ha ha, i would hate to be around Kapranova to. He's kind of creepy once i think about it, ha ha ha. The way he's always quite and the way you never know what hes thinking, lol. I'm like scared of my own characters sometimes!
ha ha ha, a gun nice! I wonder if he'd just joke at the site of it.
And no worries! chapter five is almost finished to! ha ha ha, i started writing it right after chapter four...it's a cliff hanger because i wanted this scene to be explained from kapranova's perspective, ha ha ha.
Thanks so much for reading! I love discussing my writings with you.
No this is about my other original character Kapranova. ha ha ha. You would think i would write about Akinauni but...sadly i havent ha ha ha. It's probably because the story Akinauni is in, he isnt the main person. He's the villian who dosent really show up until a while, ha ha. Sorry about that.
Maybe i'll write a story about akinauni sometime. Like a short story or something, ha ha ha.
Yeah i hate to read to so it's completely understandable. I'm just greatful that you stopped by, ha ha ha. I have all this free time right now so i just thought i'd get to writing my story. It's been a while, i'm kind of loosing my touch eep!
I am already starting on chapter five, but probably am going to stop and work on something with akinauni, ha ha ha. Sheesh thanks King, making me want to do something else. jk.
saekimidori
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/04/10 | Reply
It's good that you have now a chapter in the princess' narration, because I was kind of curious as to what was going on in her head, exactly.
And I wonder what's going to happen? =O
P.S. I find something useful for your challenge... Hehehe. X3
Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/04/10 | Reply
I'm a bit behind with reading this... I have to say though, it is very enjoyable! I'd say this is one of the best stories i've read on theOtaku. I haven't read this latest chapter yet, but my eyes hurt... I'll save it for tomorrow *smiles*
AvariceTears
Senior Otaku | Posted 01/04/10 | Reply
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Ha ha ha, dont worry i am already planning on that situation...on the night of the death, aherm herm. It is actually probably going to happen a lot more in the story to. Like with this situation of her memories and what not. I cant leave Reyles in the shadows about this event, he is obviously going to be furious.
Uh...i actually hated this chapter. I felt it was too rushed and i dont know, it was hard for me to get into Yelena's character without exaggerating it. There is more information on her reaction towards Kapranova's proposal in the fith chapter believe me, and i am working on it.
Ha ha ha, so no worries my love I am already aware of what needs to be done.
I dont think i'm going to be anymore point of views for a while though. I think it's fine the way it is. The King will show himself through others since he is pretty much mentioned through all the different points of views of the characters. Based on their views of him you can get a pretty good understanding of what kind of man he is.
I am going to try to work more on the queen to. I like her character and i want to show more of it in the upcoming chapters. Also my new character, Jacobi, still needs to be introduced into the story...aherm herm, Kapranova's assistant, lol. It's all coming, just keep in mind that this is barely the fourth chapter, ((snort chuckle)) :-B
Thankyou so much for reading and giving me feedback. It really helps me plan my chapters better in the future. Thankyou.
-Avarice-
AvariceTears
Senior Otaku | Posted 01/04/10 | Reply
@:
Ha ha ha, i would hate to be around Kapranova to. He's kind of creepy once i think about it, ha ha ha. The way he's always quite and the way you never know what hes thinking, lol. I'm like scared of my own characters sometimes!
ha ha ha, a gun nice! I wonder if he'd just joke at the site of it.
And no worries! chapter five is almost finished to! ha ha ha, i started writing it right after chapter four...it's a cliff hanger because i wanted this scene to be explained from kapranova's perspective, ha ha ha.
Thanks so much for reading! I love discussing my writings with you.
-Avarice-
AvariceTears
Senior Otaku | Posted 01/04/10 | Reply
@:
No this is about my other original character Kapranova. ha ha ha. You would think i would write about Akinauni but...sadly i havent ha ha ha. It's probably because the story Akinauni is in, he isnt the main person. He's the villian who dosent really show up until a while, ha ha. Sorry about that.
Maybe i'll write a story about akinauni sometime. Like a short story or something, ha ha ha.
Yeah i hate to read to so it's completely understandable. I'm just greatful that you stopped by, ha ha ha. I have all this free time right now so i just thought i'd get to writing my story. It's been a while, i'm kind of loosing my touch eep!
I am already starting on chapter five, but probably am going to stop and work on something with akinauni, ha ha ha. Sheesh thanks King, making me want to do something else. jk.
-Avarice-