Definitely trippy, and very interesting. I feel you - transitions are really tough, but you've got me totally curious about the big reveals I know you have in store. Can't wait to see the arc wrap up!
And my scene with the cupcake was totally epic, by the way.
I have those same feelings about this one. It's apart of a grander scheme of things, you know? So it's going to be the weakest, as we have to lead up to the climax and the conclusion. Transitions aren't my strong point, which is illustrated best here.
I liked seeing the "We could have been great together" bit finally. It was like I suddenly went "oh yeah! It's a prompt response!"
This was important because of the dream sequences and all, but I dunno, this chapter didn't quite hit with the same power as the previous ones (though granted, it was also shorter than the others). I think it maybe had something to do with seeing all the dream-narration in italics, and it just feeling weird for me like it was suddenly an all different omniscient narrator explaining the dreams. Can't really say there's any other way to go about it though, so I dunno.
Regardless, this is gonna be a pretty epic ending, so I'm excited.
NightBeck
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/13/08 | Reply
Definitely trippy, and very interesting. I feel you - transitions are really tough, but you've got me totally curious about the big reveals I know you have in store. Can't wait to see the arc wrap up!
And my scene with the cupcake was totally epic, by the way.
TimeChaser
Madman With a Box (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/13/08 | Reply
Woah, triptacular. @_@
Heh, I'm eager to see if there is some significance to the dreams and wherever Beck was.
Bazinga!
Katana
Goggalor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/13/08 | Reply
@SomeGuy:
I have those same feelings about this one. It's apart of a grander scheme of things, you know? So it's going to be the weakest, as we have to lead up to the climax and the conclusion. Transitions aren't my strong point, which is illustrated best here.
"In Kat's wor we trust."
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 08/13/08 | Reply
I liked seeing the "We could have been great together" bit finally. It was like I suddenly went "oh yeah! It's a prompt response!"
This was important because of the dream sequences and all, but I dunno, this chapter didn't quite hit with the same power as the previous ones (though granted, it was also shorter than the others). I think it maybe had something to do with seeing all the dream-narration in italics, and it just feeling weird for me like it was suddenly an all different omniscient narrator explaining the dreams. Can't really say there's any other way to go about it though, so I dunno.
Regardless, this is gonna be a pretty epic ending, so I'm excited.