her decisions are supposed to be spontanouse! And im not angry and not taking it personally. After all, everyone needs critisism to grow and learn. But you can't learn without also having support. WOW! I just came up that from the top of my head! that should be put in the world book of awesome statements! LOL!
hi EoAA. Now don't take any of this personaly, i'm simply giving you some constructive critism, which i hope you will return, 'cause after all what are friends for. I think you have the good basis for the story but i think you need to add more description and maybe some more of valentina's thoughts, a lot of her decisions seemed a bit spontanouse, and it would have been good if you'd made it a bit longer. But other wise good job :) and remember this is to help, not be mean. lol
It's good to see someone's bothering to read this. We're soooooo happy your still reading. If you like it please spread the word as we are deserate for feedback. lol
EoAA
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/26/09 | Reply
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Thanks, don't forget to refer anyone to us! we would love to have as much feedback as possible!
EoAA
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/05/09 | Reply
I can understand that I don't understand... LOL
EoAA
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/05/09 | Reply
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Wish you luck LOL
EoAA
Otakuite++ | Posted 07/31/09 | Reply
her decisions are supposed to be spontanouse! And im not angry and not taking it personally. After all, everyone needs critisism to grow and learn. But you can't learn without also having support. WOW! I just came up that from the top of my head! that should be put in the world book of awesome statements! LOL!
VWBSZWAS
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/30/09 | Reply
hi EoAA. Now don't take any of this personaly, i'm simply giving you some constructive critism, which i hope you will return, 'cause after all what are friends for. I think you have the good basis for the story but i think you need to add more description and maybe some more of valentina's thoughts, a lot of her decisions seemed a bit spontanouse, and it would have been good if you'd made it a bit longer. But other wise good job :) and remember this is to help, not be mean. lol
EoAA
Otakuite++ | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
@VWBSZWAS:
Yeah! We are REALLY desperate for feedaback.
Last edited by EoAA at 12:52:22 AM EDT on July 30, 2009.
VWBSZWAS
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
@Valiant Faerie:
It's good to see someone's bothering to read this. We're soooooo happy your still reading. If you like it please spread the word as we are deserate for feedback. lol
EoAA
Otakuite++ | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
@Valiant Faerie:
Wait a little maybye soon
Valiant Faerie
Otakuite+ | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
Bah! i wanna read more!!!
i will say that im extremely interested! 