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    Hero of Thyme (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/13/10 | Reply

    I thought you were doing a regular post at first until I got to the part about the dead brother. Then I thought "Wait a minute..."

    Just shows how brilliant I am. :P It was a good read btw, I really enjoyed it. :D

    ~Colleen

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    Gambino (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/13/10 | Reply

    Thanks guys, I kinda just got the creative itch and just wrote whatever. It took me like 45 minutes.

    Could have done with a proof-read, but it was more like a "Hey, I'm in the mood to write, let's do this."

    Thanks again for reading :D

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    Bagel Gurl | Posted 03/12/10 | Reply

    I really liked this. If any writing doesn't snag me after the 1-2 lines I don't enjoy it but you did. Awesome job.

    Six-year-olds and nuclear weapons: a combination that just can't be beat.

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    Guru's Chosen | Posted 03/12/10 | Reply

    I liked this.Quite a lot.
    It was really well-structured and the way you finished made me smile.

    Also,'loneliest' #_#