Haha thank you! i was like "Uhh.... i forgt how to spell this..." ahaha :) Yeah. Thought i would jot down some current feelings. i think at some point, everyone feels something around this edge ya know?
Crawling Back to Sin?
Crawling to Temtaption?
Tempting Sin?
Those are all I can think of for now. I really liked the way you wrote this ^_^ I used to feel like this, so I know what it's like >.>
I really like the way it flows. I found one word that was spelled wrong: you put "taughting" smile instead of "taunting" just thought i'd let ya know XD
freya42
Senior Otaku | Posted 05/16/10 | Reply
@twilight tiger:
Haha thank you! i was like "Uhh.... i forgt how to spell this..." ahaha :) Yeah. Thought i would jot down some current feelings. i think at some point, everyone feels something around this edge ya know?
twilight tiger
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/12/10 | Reply
Crawling Back to Sin?
Crawling to Temtaption?
Tempting Sin?
Those are all I can think of for now. I really liked the way you wrote this ^_^ I used to feel like this, so I know what it's like >.>
I really like the way it flows. I found one word that was spelled wrong: you put "taughting" smile instead of "taunting" just thought i'd let ya know XD
this poem was really nice tho ^_^