You write so lovely! Everything flowed nicely, especially since you added your own parts of story to the plot. They fit in wonderfully! And Harry's character is perfect - subtly courageous, but still a small boy in thought.
Meritorious, indeed. Your story almost made me think that it was a part of the story in the Harry Potter book itself. I hope to see more of your stories...
(My very first comment in theotaku.com, July 7, 2010)
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/29/09 | Reply
Harry Potter fanfics are one of my favourites to read I like very much how you turned the story around^^ Well done^^ Especially how he'd had letters before the 'first one', lol^^ *hugs*
AkariTheDemon
Otakuite+ | Posted 07/07/10 | Reply
You write so lovely! Everything flowed nicely, especially since you added your own parts of story to the plot. They fit in wonderfully! And Harry's character is perfect - subtly courageous, but still a small boy in thought.
byakuchi
Otakuite | Posted 07/07/10 | Reply
Meritorious, indeed. Your story almost made me think that it was a part of the story in the Harry Potter book itself. I hope to see more of your stories...
(My very first comment in theotaku.com, July 7, 2010)
bookworm4444
Senior Otaku | Posted 12/29/09 | Reply
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant... But who exactly was his guardian? It sounds like Hagrid but it could be Dumbledore... Great job!
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/29/09 | Reply
Harry Potter fanfics are one of my favourites to read
I like very much how you turned the story around^^ Well done^^ Especially how he'd had letters before the 'first one', lol^^ *hugs*
~S.G~