Very cool. This is a really creative idea, I like it a lot. A few minimal grammar mistakes, but the story was SO GOOD, I didn't really care. Keep writing! I'd love to see how this ends. In fact, I'm going to go check out your world and see if you continued it. Great job, I really enjoyed it!
Oh, why thank you so much! You're welcome for the comment. My pleasure. So in other words, you're random, no? Okay. I'll keep writing for sure! Thanks again!
wow, REALLY GOOD! You did well. use your talent wisley. and thanx 4 the comment. my world is kinda crazy and different. i just spit out whatever is on my mind. so...yeah. keep writing chica!
-<^..^>
Razing Phoenix
Rising from Ashes (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/23/10 | Reply
@people arnt 4 me:
Yeah, I added another part to it if you'd like to read it. I might continue it and try to finish it, too.
~Razi-chan
people arnt 4 me
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/23/10 | Reply
so thn u r gunna rite another midnight blade is that wat u ment
Razing Phoenix
Rising from Ashes (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/22/10 | Reply
@people arnt 4 me:
Wow, really? Thank you so much! I wonder what makes it so good?
~Razi-chan
people arnt 4 me
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/22/10 | Reply
tht was such an awsum story u hav to finish it i hav to no wat happens next it was soooooooo good
cherrichan13
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 07/06/09 | Reply
Very cool. This is a really creative idea, I like it a lot. A few minimal grammar mistakes, but the story was SO GOOD, I didn't really care.
Keep writing! I'd love to see how this ends. In fact, I'm going to go check out your world and see if you continued it. Great job, I really enjoyed it!
Razing Phoenix
Rising from Ashes (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/25/09 | Reply
@purplekittyartist:
Oh, why thank you so much! You're welcome for the comment. My pleasure. So in other words, you're random, no? Okay. I'll keep writing for sure! Thanks again!
~Razi-chan
purplekittyartist
Otakuite++ | Posted 03/25/09 | Reply
wow, REALLY GOOD! You did well. use your talent wisley. and thanx 4 the comment. my world is kinda crazy and different. i just spit out whatever is on my mind. so...yeah. keep writing chica!
-<^..^>
pedegg
Otakuite+ | Posted 11/25/08 | Reply
Nice,you described everything very well. good. awesome! I write too!You should give me feedback if you read it. If you want to you don't have to.
Last edited by pedegg at 10:35:50 PM EST on November 25, 2008.