Thanks Dixie thats a big help! And I was originally gonna take the conversation tord the end a bit different but I wanted to see how you would react! XD
I like the interactions and how you compiled their personalities and how they would react to certain situations. (such as how Konkerou is upset since he attacked that guy at the jail) Nice descriptions on everything. Can't wait to read the next one! x)
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
@FreshBlood:
haha. I like what you changed and the extension you added xD
It really is a plot twist. can't wait to read more C:
FreshBlood
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
@DixieWings:
Thanks Dixie thats a big help! And I was originally gonna take the conversation tord the end a bit different but I wanted to see how you would react! XD
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
I like the interactions and how you compiled their personalities and how they would react to certain situations. (such as how Konkerou is upset since he attacked that guy at the jail) Nice descriptions on everything. Can't wait to read the next one! x)
btw, Kagome's friends are Yuka, Eri, and Ayumi :D