For the second part: They kissed! :DDD
I liked how Hiro was taken into a shadow and they were both left to fight the army by themselves and the test was one of courage and whether he would stand up to the enemies or not. Keep up the great work! this is really coming along good. C:
This turned out really good! :D
I like the haunted feeling this has and everything. You come up with some really good plots > v<
The only thing is to watch some of the spelling. Like, *awnsered is *answered, *remane is *remain, *groweled is *growled, *echoeing is *echoing. Just stuff like that. Hope that helps xD
Can't wait to read the next one!! Let me know when you finish it x)
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/21/10 | Reply
For the second part: They kissed! :DDD
I liked how Hiro was taken into a shadow and they were both left to fight the army by themselves and the test was one of courage and whether he would stand up to the enemies or not. Keep up the great work! this is really coming along good. C:
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/14/10 | Reply
This turned out really good! :D
I like the haunted feeling this has and everything. You come up with some really good plots > v<
The only thing is to watch some of the spelling. Like, *awnsered is *answered, *remane is *remain, *groweled is *growled, *echoeing is *echoing. Just stuff like that. Hope that helps xD
Can't wait to read the next one!! Let me know when you finish it x)