Heee~ nice use of distractions to break off what she has to say. It's a really natural way to cut-off and makes sense C: the only thing you really didn't need added was the author's note or saying it's the end of part15.
ahh great descriptions of their fighting techniques and use of suspense. keep up the great work!!
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/21/10 | Reply
Heee~ nice use of distractions to break off what she has to say. It's a really natural way to cut-off and makes sense C: the only thing you really didn't need added was the author's note or saying it's the end of part15.
ahh great descriptions of their fighting techniques and use of suspense. keep up the great work!!