It's was so darkly funny, Beckles.. I enjoyed this very much. The descriptives are so lush. It's absolutely tangible. I really enjoyed it, Beck. And she's pretty relatable. Is that scary for me?
I'm still floored by how completely you described the setting and characters with your very first sentence. Holy crap.
Regardless of how of a downer the story is in general, I still like how you have a general feeling that even if Jasper feels like life is crap, she's still positive enough about it for knowing that her life is still nowhere near as crappy as the other poor bastards she sees regularly. Well, maybe not completely, but y'know - she's not down and out yet.
moletta
Firestarter (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/02/08 | Reply
It's was so darkly funny, Beckles.. I enjoyed this very much. The descriptives are so lush. It's absolutely tangible. I really enjoyed it, Beck. And she's pretty relatable. Is that scary for me?
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 06/02/08 | Reply
I'm still floored by how completely you described the setting and characters with your very first sentence. Holy crap.
Regardless of how of a downer the story is in general, I still like how you have a general feeling that even if Jasper feels like life is crap, she's still positive enough about it for knowing that her life is still nowhere near as crappy as the other poor bastards she sees regularly. Well, maybe not completely, but y'know - she's not down and out yet.