Oh my god, beckles! This is truly, truly beautiful. I love poetry when its well done especially when it describes in such detail that you start to visualize what is happening while you read...and I actually saw the girl and the valley and the man...wow...just wow...
I so want to read more of it! Seriously! You got me hooked!! XP
Madman With a Box (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/23/08 | Reply
I've been through poetry class and read poetry, but I was never in tune with it as I am with fiction, but I have to say I like the concepts in this ^^ It really would make a nifty short story if you ever wanted to expand on it.
But I've been told that that one day,
a man came to that town
with no baggage and no destination,
and he leaned up against a ruined wall,
waiting for her.
Why is it I visualize the Doctor being that man XD Must be the no baggage and no destination part.
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/01/08 | Reply
@NightBeck:
Hehe alright! Consider it done then! =D
The crazy bubbly shadow
NightBeck
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/01/08 | Reply
@ShadowLight:
Darling, I'd be absolutely thrilled if you drew her! You know I love your art!
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/01/08 | Reply
Btw can I draw this girl? 'Cause seriously I have the urge to draw her right now but not without your permission of course.
The crazy bubbly shadow
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/01/08 | Reply
Oh my god, beckles! This is truly, truly beautiful. I love poetry when its well done especially when it describes in such detail that you start to visualize what is happening while you read...and I actually saw the girl and the valley and the man...wow...just wow...
I so want to read more of it! Seriously! You got me hooked!! XP
The crazy bubbly shadow
TimeChaser
Madman With a Box (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/23/08 | Reply
I've been through poetry class and read poetry, but I was never in tune with it as I am with fiction, but I have to say I like the concepts in this ^^ It really would make a nifty short story if you ever wanted to expand on it.
But I've been told that that one day,
a man came to that town
with no baggage and no destination,
and he leaned up against a ruined wall,
waiting for her.
Why is it I visualize the Doctor being that man XD Must be the no baggage and no destination part.
Bazinga!
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 03/23/08 | Reply
I read it, and I found the words to be pretty. Sadly, I really can't say anything more beyond that due to my poetic illiteracy.
If you wanna tell me about it some time, though, I'd love to listen. I know that's not how it's supposed to work, but . . . y'know . . .