@DemonsandAngels:

i was thinking that too (:

@nikkeh09:

i feel like the betrayal should be the center plot considering it can be so much more powerful.

@DemonsandAngels:

yes, i mean i will have both regardless just trying to see what direction i should take it in.. i'm three chapters in and i have those two storylines to intertwine... just dont know which one will be the dominant one ^^

@Hifsa:

see thats what i am going for i just dont know if i should do a family betrayal with a hint of love or focus on the love with the family betrayal as a background story

@DoubleOtaku:

sorry for the confusion i was trying to type it out while looking as if i was paying attention at my meeting ha ha... um... ya pretty much regardless of what p.o.v. i take i will have the same characters. i just have a hard time trying to figure who's view it should be from

I say both! How fun would that be!

@DoubleOtaku:

I think she wants to know the plot. Love story or family betrayal story. She's saying the point of view will be from the boy or girl.

You can make it both Add a love story with family betrayal, it'll be more drama

I'm a little confused by your post :/ are you asking what P.O.V to use...? Would you mind rephrasing a leeeetle???? I is very confuzzled >.<