Me: Oh....okay. Usually, each line is ten syllables and follows this ryhming pattern:
A
B
A
B
C
D
C
D
E
F
E
F
G
G
Also in a sonnet, the abab, cdcd, and efef parts could be of a topic (Example: A love for chocolate) In these three sections, you can write how much you like chocolate and how you dream for it. But in the last two rhyming lines, it's mostly the opposite of what you just said. (In this case you can write in the last two lines how you blame chocolate cause it makes you fat). You understand a little bit more?
Hybrid: That was a copy... And I won't show it to ANYONE if you just do us a favor... and no, it's not yaori related, anything humiliating, or anything scarring beyond life
Me: I wish I could write poems good... I feel I suck
Sam: O.O What is the picture/video are you using?!?
Me: I got inspired after reading the poem, then there was a poem called The end of The Raven by Edgar Allan Poe's Cat. It was how while Poe was talking to the Raven, the Cat sneaked up and ate the Raven whole. That's how I got Loe (Poe's Cat) and Darkness (The Raven). I'll try to post their profiles later.
Sam: Oh god don't tell me you have that video where those ravens annoy me at the pumpkin patch......O_o
Me: *glares at the popular challenges* I despise you, challenges...But it's good to know... Changing the subject I created two new characters for NBC. One is Worm's cousin and the other is a raven...They are both from Edgar Allan Poe's poem The Raven.^^ Pretty neat, huh?
Spits: It good today since Jack's "discovering" the 4th of July, Sally's went to a city vacatoin with her son, Kevin, and the rest of the citizens are too worried about Halloween right now to notice...
Me: *imagines Ketih screaming like a girl right now and laughs* XD XD XD!
Spits: *smiles evilly* Blackmail is good. But this has to come out perfect... If anyone knew of this, we would go to jail considering that Sam is Jack's brother...
Me: I agree. I should know...my main character is psychic. It's cool that you can know things ahead of time and move things around with your mind and stuff
Spits: Problems on that one. Chicago went to jail on account of he's insane, Akane is grounded so she can't help us, and Jack stole back Boss's flamethrower. Where else are we going to get fire?
Spits: May I remind you that the "plant" you speak of is very venomous, is in love with you, a cruel bug-killing seducer, and was created by your weakling of a sister?!
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: That's great ^^ And then we'd get rid of two birds with one stone, huh Spits?
Me: Yeah. That helps me understand more ^^
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: O_o Damn that crazy bat...Okay, I'll help
Me: Oh....okay. Usually, each line is ten syllables and follows this ryhming pattern:
A
B
A
B
C
D
C
D
E
F
E
F
G
G
Also in a sonnet, the abab, cdcd, and efef parts could be of a topic (Example: A love for chocolate) In these three sections, you can write how much you like chocolate and how you dream for it. But in the last two rhyming lines, it's mostly the opposite of what you just said. (In this case you can write in the last two lines how you blame chocolate cause it makes you fat). You understand a little bit more?
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: The items that Chicago stole from your house to play against me in blackjack...
Me: Yeah, it's a sonnet
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: And? I need something else...
Me: Like a sonnet or something? Sorry but I never heard of this before. I might know this but I'm not sure..
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: You get the blackmail tape
Me: The traditional AB style
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: Fine...but what do I get in return?
Me: Narrow it down please...what do you mean by traditional?
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: You're the only one that knows fire that can help though
Me: Traditional first I suppose
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: O_o hell no! With her thorns, she could rip my body into pieces before I fry her!!!
Me: So what do you need help on first?
Last edited by SandLover13 at 6:35:58 PM EDT on May 18, 2009.
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: It's not any bitch though... This bitch is Thorn
Me: That'd help ^^
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: Let me guess, some bitch stole Spits' girlfriend and you want me to help you guys....
Spits: How did YOU know?
Sam: It's so obvious, dude...
Me: It's okay. I'm learning poetry at school so I can teach you if you like.^^
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/18/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: That was a copy... And I won't show it to ANYONE if you just do us a favor... and no, it's not yaori related, anything humiliating, or anything scarring beyond life
Me: I wish I could write poems good... I feel I suck
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/17/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: *closes his eyes and burns the video* HA! You don't have it now!!!!
Me: ohhhhhhhh...
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/15/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: I have the video...
Me: I actually read them yesterday
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/14/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: First of all, I don't wear underwear. Second those are lies!!!!
Me: Okay. I posted the poems up today so you can check them out
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: Does "underwear kareoke of the song Pokerface" familiar to you? *smirks* or maybe singing "womanizer" is more of what you recall
Me: Nice... Once you post them, I'll read them... oh, that reminds me that I gotta post Scratch's
Last edited by DeidaraNarutoClan at 8:23:00 PM EDT on May 13, 2009.
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: O.O What is the picture/video are you using?!?
Me: I got inspired after reading the poem, then there was a poem called The end of The Raven by Edgar Allan Poe's Cat. It was how while Poe was talking to the Raven, the Cat sneaked up and ate the Raven whole. That's how I got Loe (Poe's Cat) and Darkness (The Raven). I'll try to post their profiles later.
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: No... it's actually worse than that >:3
Me: That's awesome! I love Edgar Allen Poe ^^ he my idol... And it's nice to hear about the new OCs
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: Oh god don't tell me you have that video where those ravens annoy me at the pumpkin patch......O_o
Me: *glares at the popular challenges* I despise you, challenges...But it's good to know... Changing the subject I created two new characters for NBC. One is Worm's cousin and the other is a raven...They are both from Edgar Allan Poe's poem The Raven.^^ Pretty neat, huh?
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: Distraction... I got blackmail on you...
Me: That's because fanart challenges and wallpaper challenges are actually the most popular
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: Soooo...how does this affect me now?
Spits: *under Hybrid's wing* Now I know how Jack got his stupidity from....*rolls eyes*
Me: I hear ya....usually no one does my fanword challenge. But I got a LOT of people doing my fanart contest...Creepy...O_o
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: No stupid, how can you smash your head when you're head is on you?
Me: ... Adding to that fan arts are different...
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: You mean the pumpkin I smashed is actually my head in disguise!?!
Me: Okayz...
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: Oh... It's not so much as what I'm going to do to you... it's what you did yourself...
Me: It does kinda seem simple. I'll enter if I can figure what to draw... I wanted to make a challenge... but I don't really feel like it
Last edited by DeidaraNarutoClan at 4:22:26 PM EDT on May 13, 2009.
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: What are you going to do to me?
Me: Ohhh. I picked it cuz' it's kinda easier than the other challenges...
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: Oh really? I feel you can go into our negotiation...
Me: Yep, I got it some time ago
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: Whatever you want, my answer is no....
Me: Oh yeah, I forgot about that.^^ You got my fanart challenge yet?
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: Yo... What's up Sam?
Me: And it's not possible for the time being *taps on computer screen*
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: Who the hell said that?
Me: Yeah, I didn't mean literally...
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
*pumpkin smashes against the wall*
?: Pumpkin murderer!
Me: I hope not literally... for one of us, that might hurt...
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: Now that's spooky..in a bad way...*throws the pumpkin on the wall*
Me: That's good. Now to cure Writer's block...we need to smash our heads together...just joking...XD
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
*candle flickers on*
Me: And it works too ^^
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Sam: Hmmm? Strange....*picks up pumpkin*
Me: You know with ideas like these, we can get rid of Artist's black! XD
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
*a pumpkin is left on his porch*
Me: XD Yes! Bones and all!
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Spits: Right...
*Sam's place*
Sam: Another boring day...I wish something would happen...*door bell rings "This is Halloween"* Who's there? *opens door*
Me: And I'll be psychic and move Keith around inside a toxic waste factory where he will melt into ashes XD
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: We just can't draw too much attention
Me: XD That'd be so friggin awesome that I'd have way too much fun with it
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Spits: It good today since Jack's "discovering" the 4th of July, Sally's went to a city vacatoin with her son, Kevin, and the rest of the citizens are too worried about Halloween right now to notice...
Me: *imagines Ketih screaming like a girl right now and laughs* XD XD XD!
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: ... Now we just have to find the right moment...
Me: XD Heck yeah! That'd be awesome
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Spits: True...At least we aren't Chicago when we go to jail. Now let's go blackmail a scarecrow!*walks to the pumpkin patch*
Me: Yeah, you can shape-shift into a chainsaw and cut Keith's head with it...or you can just torture him with rabid animals >XD
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: And adding to that Jack hates us...
Me: Yeah, having psychic abilities and being telekinetic does seem really awesome. I'd like having the ability to shape-shift
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Spits: *smiles evilly* Blackmail is good. But this has to come out perfect... If anyone knew of this, we would go to jail considering that Sam is Jack's brother...
Me: I agree. I should know...my main character is psychic. It's cool that you can know things ahead of time and move things around with your mind and stuff
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: I was thinking we go to Sam's place and threaten him with blackmail
Me: Being psychic ain't that bad
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Spits: You mean the mamga maze or we're paying Sam to burn? (Note that Sam has fire abilities)
Me: You just had to say that...-_-
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: ... I know a place...
Me: It could be worse
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/11/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Spits: Problems on that one. Chicago went to jail on account of he's insane, Akane is grounded so she can't help us, and Jack stole back Boss's flamethrower. Where else are we going to get fire?
Me: O_o I really didn't want to know that...
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/11/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: ... Oh yeah -_-' ... just throw fire on her
Me: ... Or maybe both
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/11/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Spits: May I remind you that the "plant" you speak of is very venomous, is in love with you, a cruel bug-killing seducer, and was created by your weakling of a sister?!
Me: Maybe one of us are phsycic...O_o
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/11/09 | Reply
@SandLover13:
Hybrid: ... Geez, you're taking this a bit harshly... it's a plant for christ's sake...
Me: Yup... it is kinda creepy...
Last edited by DeidaraNarutoClan at 8:29:37 PM EDT on May 11, 2009.
SandLover13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/11/09 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
Spits: *sighs* Yeah, but now it's even more personnal! GET THE ARMY< GET THE NAVY, GET AKANE FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!!! We need to kill that b**** ASAP!
Me: O.O Oh god...I wrote that just to make it interseting...I didn't know you were planning this...This is creepy....
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/11/09 | Reply
Hybrid: Um... I thought it already was personnal when she ate your dad...
Me: ._. dude... I was actually going to draw something with Taro hanging himself and Jess cutting the rope o_O wtf?