Not bad!! I would add a little more detail into your surrounding subscriptions and I'm curious if he's using wings or flying through the sky more like superman! It's a good start though and it does make me curious as to where it's going, which is always something you want as a writer!
Calicoe
Otakuite | Posted 04/21/21 | Reply
Not bad!! I would add a little more detail into your surrounding subscriptions and I'm curious if he's using wings or flying through the sky more like superman! It's a good start though and it does make me curious as to where it's going, which is always something you want as a writer!