Screenshot attempt WIP

This is what I've been working on for the past couple days. It's the first time I've attempted cell-shading, so don't judge too harshly. I know I've still got to fix up a whole bunch of stuff, so give it a day or two more! >3<'

You'll probably recognize these two from my recent deviation. It's the same two characters, Ryan and Gil. This is actually a scene out of my story. You'll see what Gil's saying when I actually finish it.

Everything is drawn by me (yes even the bricks). Hope you're all doing well! I'll try to draw more I promise! >.<'

P.S. Please tell me what you think so far, and give tips that will make it better!

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