Wooahh! It's a really cool plot! Got some questions for you though:
1. So Kain has an older brother? Then shouldn't the older brother be the king?
2. Can Kain ever grow old?
3. Is "I" a girl or boy?
4. Why do the glasses need to hide the weaker demons?
5. Is there a reason as to why Kain is always wearing that choker?
When I have time, I'll go check out the 2nd chapter- but boy, this is great! Lovin' it!! :DD
AndrewMangaka021
Otakuite+ | Posted 12/02/11 | Reply
Cool~ I like it~
Aria Sky
Senior Otaku | Posted 11/27/11 | Reply
Wooahh! It's a really cool plot! Got some questions for you though:
1. So Kain has an older brother? Then shouldn't the older brother be the king?
2. Can Kain ever grow old?
3. Is "I" a girl or boy?
4. Why do the glasses need to hide the weaker demons?
5. Is there a reason as to why Kain is always wearing that choker?
When I have time, I'll go check out the 2nd chapter- but boy, this is great! Lovin' it!! :DD
dubstepunk
Otakuite | Posted 11/26/11 | Reply
Very well written! I enjoyed it immensely. (You put my story to shame!) Keep up the good work! :)