Hey wow this sounds really cool. Everyone loves action! I agree with 54a3 about the mix martial arts. Deffinitly. MMA is the best. But I am a really big fan of Kung-fu. I cant really offer any suggestions other than that right now becuz I dont know what all you have in mind. Several ideas have passed thru but I just keep contridicting myself with the notion that you may have already thought of that.
Anyways it sounds pretty hardcore. I like it.
Hey there 54a3! Thanks for reading my chapter/episode. Thanks too for the suggestions but I made sure to cover all those things before hand. And no it's not like in Kenichi. I hope I didn't sound like a jerk; please don't take it the wrong the way or anything.
I should have put up something about the characters before I posted...my fault ><. I'll put up a post later on to introduce the OC's of the story!
Again thanks for the tips and I'm apologize if my comment earlier was in any way offensive.
Last edited by Umeda Isao at 11:05:19 PM EDT on June 23, 2009.
hi there Umeda! okay now.Your story now is kinda like fighting/life theme like Kenichi I presume? (correct me if i'm wrong)
Here are some of my suggestions...
- a short history about the siblings
- maybe transferring schools
- they have uncle/aunt/an older friend to help them someways
(that knows fighting of course)
- a mix of martial arts world (tae kwon do, judo, capoera etc.)
Now i'm only giving you what is in my mind. I don't know if there
a manga out there that is incidentally similar to what i had in mind.
If there is...sorry:
lost lotus
Otakuite | Posted 06/27/09 | Reply
Hey wow this sounds really cool. Everyone loves action! I agree with 54a3 about the mix martial arts. Deffinitly. MMA is the best. But I am a really big fan of Kung-fu. I cant really offer any suggestions other than that right now becuz I dont know what all you have in mind. Several ideas have passed thru but I just keep contridicting myself with the notion that you may have already thought of that.
Anyways it sounds pretty hardcore. I like it.
54a3
Otakuite | Posted 06/24/09 | Reply
@Umeda Isao:
Okay okay no worries... Just keep on writing and i'll keep on commenting^^
Umeda Isao
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/23/09 | Reply
Hey there 54a3! Thanks for reading my chapter/episode. Thanks too for the suggestions but I made sure to cover all those things before hand. And no it's not like in Kenichi. I hope I didn't sound like a jerk; please don't take it the wrong the way or anything.
I should have put up something about the characters before I posted...my fault ><. I'll put up a post later on to introduce the OC's of the story!
Again thanks for the tips and I'm apologize if my comment earlier was in any way offensive.
Last edited by Umeda Isao at 11:05:19 PM EDT on June 23, 2009.
54a3
Otakuite | Posted 06/23/09 | Reply
hi there Umeda! okay now.Your story now is kinda like fighting/life theme like Kenichi I presume? (correct me if i'm wrong)
Here are some of my suggestions...
- a short history about the siblings
- maybe transferring schools
- they have uncle/aunt/an older friend to help them someways
(that knows fighting of course)
- a mix of martial arts world (tae kwon do, judo, capoera etc.)
Now i'm only giving you what is in my mind. I don't know if there
a manga out there that is incidentally similar to what i had in mind.
If there is...sorry: