Rawrtastic Siren (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/07/09 | Reply
thats why i dont lyk writin love poems..lol
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/07/09 | Reply
I love it!!! The only thing I Think You Need to work on is Structure meaning the placement of breaks and stuff, it got a little confusing. Otherwise a Great poem!!!
bluhart
Rawrtastic Siren (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/07/09 | Reply
thats why i dont lyk writin love poems..lol
Troublesum Shika
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/07/09 | Reply
I love it!!! The only thing I Think You Need to work on is Structure meaning the placement of breaks and stuff, it got a little confusing. Otherwise a Great poem!!!