ohh, thats a good poem.

@imouto chan:

cya~~~ =^____^=

@Shi Bum Bumm:

Heh heh my skillz have their limits XD Aw man....the old man is bugging me ta get off ;; Ttyl Neko san ^_^

@imouto chan:

Sweet dreams~ .3.

@imouto chan:

An you underestimate yourself, didja know that? ^^

@xPocket monsteRx:

Pft, not stupid. Kewl ^_^ Well g'night, the old man is nagging me =_=

@imouto chan:

xD It was so stupid. But thank you anyways. :']

@xPocket monsteRx:

OMgosh it's so rhymy! I think it's great Pocket san ^_^ Don't stab da poem. It deserves to live :)

@Shi Bum Bumm:

Aw thanks ^_^ You're an expert at making peoples self esteem rise, y'know that?

@imouto chan:

Alriiight~ ;D
I'll try to fit this all in here. Ahem.
"When I was born, silk diapers I'd worn. When I was a kid, I wore crowns on my lid. When I was a teen, I was known to be queen. When I became twenty, I had money aplenty. An adult I became and all was the same. Mid-life crisis was fun; I didn't have one. When I became old, I'd bathe in gold. But when I die, You'll hear me cry
Because
All my money
Was given
To charity."
*stabs the poem*

@imouto chan:

then some constructive critique is what you'll need ^___^ And judging your skill from this one poem, I'd say your darn good. The poem doesn't need to be long, this poem said a lot in just a few lines.

@xPocket monsteRx:

Sure, I'd love to ^_^

@Shi Bum Bumm:

Thank you ^_^ It seemed longer in my poem book so I was kinda sad about that XD
I might actually post more but I dunno. Most of my poems kinda suck ;;

@imouto chan:

Pshh.. nooo. Your poem is incredibly clever. Do you want to hear my poem? It's really not supposed to be meaningful, but I thought it was absolutely amazing when I thought it up. xD

That made an impact, writing 'thin line' like that. I like it, very nice poem. You should post more :]

@xPocket monsteRx:

NOT TRUE! Poetry is full of meaning ^_^ I'm sure you're a better poet than me =_=

That's creative~ :]
I made a poem once, but it's stupid and isn't meaningful at all. xD