...And that's just fantastic! (does this rhyme o_O) Well never mind, because I can already see the (many!) diverse volumes of this manga coming!
Eh...
I've directly noticed that it had the usual effect of a normal new manga: new characters, playing with time (yeah, let's just put it that way into words)... and fantasy!
As a writer myself I can advise you to make use of your fantasy as much as you can. I'm just saying this because it can be an important thing that people need for thinking and (sometimes) understanding (at least I think so).
Okay...
I wish you lots of success in your future work!
*goes back to study*
Byes! ^.^
P.S. this was the longest comment I've ever written xD
Last edited by SweetLionsUnion at 2:29:36 PM CDT on June 3, 2010.
Well, the only thing I can suggest is to make sure you research your characters well. I think it is important to develop your own style of writing that will reach out to your readers. I have never tried to write much myself, so I don't feel qualified to go around giving advice :3
I wish you the best of luck with your competition and school.
just logged in after doing taekwondo competition training...
i'm not yet planning to post my novel in that website you mentioned since i just have storyline and my novel still needs polishing, i'm too busy in a taekwondo competition, and i'm going back to school soon (4th yr high --- graduating!!!) i appreciate that you find my plot nice but i would've love your comment more if you suggested something for it... (doesn't matter)
well, i don't really mind random comments after all my novel is still in progress since i'm still doing research on historical figures and even fictional characters... so a "foundation" is still not yet built
i only mind random comments when some persons make negative stuff on taekwondo <i'll give 'em some 360 degress, jumping turning side kick & a combo of roundhouse kicks!!!>
thanks a lot!
Last edited by josephine12cute at 7:36:33 AM EDT on June 2, 2010.
Hello ^^ I followed a link from kisskiss-bangbang's world, and found myself here. I think writing your novel would be a good idea ^^ at least then you will have a firm foundation should you ever wish to transform it into a manga. I like the idea of the plot. Writing does take dedication though, my sister is writing a trilogy, so I know how much effort goes into these things ^^
I have a friend who is on a site called wattpad.com [i think that is the name] where you can write your stories and other members of the site can favrourite and comment, in a similar manner that people do on here with the art. Perhaps you could take a look there?
I wish you the best of luck~! Hope you don't mind random comments :3
I think that your plot is great. With some work and alot of planning you can make this really work. I have to admit its a very difficult plot but I think you can make it work. After all time distortions are very complicated. I admire you for taking this on. ^^
And I think you could do amazing work in your manga. Try reading some others manga's first. To get a fell for it. And hey even try making one of your own! You don't need to follow this story line *points up* but a simple one. Like a short story to get the feel for it. That might be your best bet. A short sweet manga. *smiles* Thats what i'm doing now. I want to make little cute one; but even than its hard. But i'm sure you can do it!
Oh yes I will help you find some people to critic this. I think I know some people who might help and stuff. I will direct them over here for sure. ^^ And I'll put this up in my world. See if I can grab some attention over there as well okay?
history isn't my favorite subject, but i find interest to it and i think its good to use history as one of the components of a story
i'm planning to really make a manga version of it... but sad to say that i'm not that much knowledgeable on the presentation of manga... yes i draw but other than that, i'm really clueless on it (or how should i even present it)
of course even if its just a fan art, i'm a bit of a perfectionist, so i want my novel to appear good even in manga version
but i'll try and i'll do my best!
oh! and please help me find some other critics for my novel... i'm too shy and i don't know who should i ask (can you do it for me?)i want to know their opinions :)
Last edited by josephine12cute at 1:30:50 AM EDT on June 1, 2010.
And yes I am just THAT random to start a comment with the word moo. Be afraid. Very afraid. Uh- wanyway! Onto the comment!
I really think you should do a Manga on this. You can submit it on here. Just a simple fanart manga. Minus the fanart part of course. I thin it would be nice to see. And it would cost you no money. It gives you a good start I think. To get the feel of everything you know?
Onto your plot!
I like it. Alot. It has a great like- flow to it. And can easly flow into many volumes or parts. I like that alot. I love how origanal it sounds. I also like how you want to add thing about the world history and stuff. Switching around the history and things. I really loke that. I think that you shoudl follow history, and its people very closly while at the smae time mitch match them around and such. Like history gone wrong. You know?
Anywya I hope that you take a thinking to starting on a manga. I'd love to see that. And I can't wait until you get a first draph done!
SweetLionsUnion
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/03/10 | Reply
Wow, this is ...totally full of fantasy!
...And that's just fantastic! (does this rhyme o_O) Well never mind, because I can already see the (many!) diverse volumes of this manga coming!
Eh...
I've directly noticed that it had the usual effect of a normal new manga: new characters, playing with time (yeah, let's just put it that way into words)... and fantasy!
As a writer myself I can advise you to make use of your fantasy as much as you can. I'm just saying this because it can be an important thing that people need for thinking and (sometimes) understanding (at least I think so).
Okay...
I wish you lots of success in your future work!
*goes back to study*
Byes! ^.^
P.S. this was the longest comment I've ever written xD
Last edited by SweetLionsUnion at 2:29:36 PM CDT on June 3, 2010.
Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/02/10 | Reply
@josephine12cute:
Well, the only thing I can suggest is to make sure you research your characters well. I think it is important to develop your own style of writing that will reach out to your readers. I have never tried to write much myself, so I don't feel qualified to go around giving advice :3
I wish you the best of luck with your competition and school.
josephine12cute
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/02/10 | Reply
@Kaerlyn:
just logged in after doing taekwondo competition training...
i'm not yet planning to post my novel in that website you mentioned since i just have storyline and my novel still needs polishing, i'm too busy in a taekwondo competition, and i'm going back to school soon (4th yr high --- graduating!!!) i appreciate that you find my plot nice but i would've love your comment more if you suggested something for it... (doesn't matter)
well, i don't really mind random comments after all my novel is still in progress since i'm still doing research on historical figures and even fictional characters... so a "foundation" is still not yet built
i only mind random comments when some persons make negative stuff on taekwondo <i'll give 'em some 360 degress, jumping turning side kick & a combo of roundhouse kicks!!!>
thanks a lot!
Last edited by josephine12cute at 7:36:33 AM EDT on June 2, 2010.
Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/02/10 | Reply
Hello ^^ I followed a link from kisskiss-bangbang's world, and found myself here. I think writing your novel would be a good idea ^^ at least then you will have a firm foundation should you ever wish to transform it into a manga. I like the idea of the plot. Writing does take dedication though, my sister is writing a trilogy, so I know how much effort goes into these things ^^
I have a friend who is on a site called wattpad.com [i think that is the name] where you can write your stories and other members of the site can favrourite and comment, in a similar manner that people do on here with the art. Perhaps you could take a look there?
I wish you the best of luck~! Hope you don't mind random comments :3
kisskiss-bangbang
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/01/10 | Reply
@josephine12cute:
I think that your plot is great. With some work and alot of planning you can make this really work. I have to admit its a very difficult plot but I think you can make it work. After all time distortions are very complicated. I admire you for taking this on. ^^
And I think you could do amazing work in your manga. Try reading some others manga's first. To get a fell for it. And hey even try making one of your own! You don't need to follow this story line *points up* but a simple one. Like a short story to get the feel for it. That might be your best bet. A short sweet manga. *smiles* Thats what i'm doing now. I want to make little cute one; but even than its hard. But i'm sure you can do it!
Oh yes I will help you find some people to critic this. I think I know some people who might help and stuff. I will direct them over here for sure. ^^ And I'll put this up in my world. See if I can grab some attention over there as well okay?
matt
josephine12cute
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/01/10 | Reply
@kisskiss-bangbang:
really? you think my plot is great?
history isn't my favorite subject, but i find interest to it and i think its good to use history as one of the components of a story
i'm planning to really make a manga version of it... but sad to say that i'm not that much knowledgeable on the presentation of manga... yes i draw but other than that, i'm really clueless on it (or how should i even present it)
of course even if its just a fan art, i'm a bit of a perfectionist, so i want my novel to appear good even in manga version
but i'll try and i'll do my best!
oh! and please help me find some other critics for my novel... i'm too shy and i don't know who should i ask (can you do it for me?)i want to know their opinions :)
Last edited by josephine12cute at 1:30:50 AM EDT on June 1, 2010.
kisskiss-bangbang
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/31/10 | Reply
Moo!
And yes I am just THAT random to start a comment with the word moo. Be afraid. Very afraid. Uh- wanyway! Onto the comment!
I really think you should do a Manga on this. You can submit it on here. Just a simple fanart manga. Minus the fanart part of course. I thin it would be nice to see. And it would cost you no money. It gives you a good start I think. To get the feel of everything you know?
Onto your plot!
I like it. Alot. It has a great like- flow to it. And can easly flow into many volumes or parts. I like that alot. I love how origanal it sounds. I also like how you want to add thing about the world history and stuff. Switching around the history and things. I really loke that. I think that you shoudl follow history, and its people very closly while at the smae time mitch match them around and such. Like history gone wrong. You know?
Anywya I hope that you take a thinking to starting on a manga. I'd love to see that. And I can't wait until you get a first draph done!
Good luck!
^^
matt