Otakuite++ | Posted 11/24/08 | Reply
@The Shadow Prince:
it just doesnt have the same feel/flow as the rest of the poem.
Rawrtastic Siren (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/08 | Reply
its awesome!!!!!i love it!!!i havent written nething lately...i jus havent had ne urges to write......
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/24/08 | Reply
@lgxfuadxxx:
awkward how?
Nothing penetrates your faded iris
that line seems a bit awkward um. i actually like it for the most part.
lgxfuadxxx
Otakuite++ | Posted 11/24/08 | Reply
@The Shadow Prince:
it just doesnt have the same feel/flow as the rest of the poem.
bluhart
Rawrtastic Siren (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/08 | Reply
its awesome!!!!!i love it!!!i havent written nething lately...i jus havent had ne urges to write......
The Shadow Prince
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/24/08 | Reply
@lgxfuadxxx:
awkward h
ow?
lgxfuadxxx
Otakuite++ | Posted 11/24/08 | Reply
Nothing penetrates your faded iris
that line seems a bit awkward
um.
i actually like it for the most part.